punchlines vs multis

[Saxx]

So I've completed a few battles now still new to it all but one thing I've noticed is im losing a heck of a lot of battles to rubbish verses that contain loads of multis about absolutely nothing that makes any sense whatsoever.

By my own admission im quite proud of my punchlines. I think they are pretty funny and usually always insult the opponent.

BUT im getting beaten by multis that make no sense whatsoever.

Is it just me that thinks this or do the voters just look at verses without actually reading them?

Opinions?

[Joe MuGGz]

Originally Posted by sax0joe

So I've completed a few battles now still new to it all but one thing I've noticed is im losing a heck of a lot of battles to rubbish verses that contain loads of multis about absolutely nothing that makes any sense whatsoever.

By my own admission im quite proud of my punchlines. I think they are pretty funny and usually always insult the opponent.

BUT im getting beaten by multis that make no sense whatsoever.

Is it just me that thinks this or do the voters just look at verses without actually reading them?

Opinions?

I personally think that a verse packed with hard hitting punchlines will always win the battle.. But hey,.. Im just one vote, yakno?

[RhetoriK]

punchlines win battles, not multis (unless you're Rican). granted, i'm no aficionado on punchlines, but if you're gonna paint a masterpiece, multis are the canvas, punchlines are the type of brush you use. the composition will make or break a painting.

-Kadinsky

[Phracture]

Don't be talking 'bogeys' this time cos if you think your SHITS HOT I hate to inform you- but IT'SNOT!

You ain't ill when you SPIT you lack punchlines and WIT! Ima help you out dog spell SPIT backwards cos it'll give you some TIPS!

you've lost this BET your more outdated than a black and white TV SET!

I'll take this little fat dwarf out cos he's one of the SEVEN ima use an mac TEN and take him to HEAVEN!

^^^^ Tbh you should expect to lose with lines like that, you lack clever ideas, good wording and strong punches all the battles you lost to is not due to multi's is due to them being better verses even though they we're "rubbish" as you call them each verse was much better than yours .. You should work on actually finding out how to make a solid punch . I believe there is a thread @Dono made ( If you can Dono post ya thread here so He can read it and elevate) , Hope nothing I said was taken out of context just tryna help you get better .

[ELOH STACKz]

I agree with @Dissizit... Punchlines are important, they bring the ohhhh's & ahhhh's. But you need to set them up with good Multi-rhyme schemes. It's about creativity & complexity. Me & Diss just had a battle, both came with hard punch lines but his Multi's were more complex. I got lazy towards the end going for comedic bars & it may end up costing me the win. We'll see how things shake out in a day or two...

Btw: I appreciate the vote in that battle @sax0joe

[Dono]

Shits damn near impossible to navigate on my phone.

http://www.letsbeef.com/forums/showt...497#post965497

Lemme know if that helps.

@Dissizit some of the examples in this aren't much harder than what he's already posting though. He might need a little more advanced concepts.

[Saxx]

Originally Posted by Dissizit

Don't be talking 'bogeys' this time cos if you think your SHITS HOT I hate to inform you- but IT'SNOT!

You ain't ill when you SPIT you lack punchlines and WIT! Ima help you out dog spell SPIT backwards cos it'll give you some TIPS!

you've lost this BET your more outdated than a black and white TV SET!

I'll take this little fat dwarf out cos he's one of the SEVEN ima use an mac TEN and take him to HEAVEN!

^^^^ Tbh you should expect to lose with lines like that, you lack clever ideas, good wording and strong punches all the battles you lost to is not due to multi's is due to them being better verses even though they we're "rubbish" as you call them each verse was much better than yours .. You should work on actually finding out how to make a solid punch . I believe there is a thread @Dono made ( If you can Dono post ya thread here so He can read it and elevate) , Hope nothing I said was taken out of context just tryna help you get better .

The bogeys punchline was epic! How could you not like that????
To be honest it I had the equipment my strenghths would be in audio as I can come up with rhymes off the top of my head. I lack the patience for writing I think.

Thanks for advice!

[Dono]

It'snot wordplay is something my little sister used for a joke punch line when she was in like first grade.

Gotta ramp up the creativity amigo.

[Phracture]

Originally Posted by sax0joe

The bogeys punchline was epic! How could you not like that????
To be honest it I had the equipment my strenghths would be in audio as I can come up with rhymes off the top of my head. I lack the patience for writing I think.

Thanks for advice!

epic ? hell no lol
you gotta get more creative bruh .

[J u s T C]

A lotta people have a hard on for multi's on here. to the point you can get people voting against you even if your opponent had next to no punches and a bunch of multi's. I don't know what it is about this place but it's as if every new sign up just got done listening to SSLP or watching 8 mile for the first time. this site seems lost in a time warp sometimes. it's very odd to witness.