new rap

[OriginalGrime]

your bars are manic
but get ready to panic
im smashing them like im the titanic
coming in big feeling gigantic
bars are solid
need speed just call me sonic
im on it
coming in hard like comet
bars straight like gin without the tonic

im a young youth 17
coming straight out of the grime scene
go nice fuck it go mean
im going mad turning green
im a hulk smash, splashing the cash
sirens coming closer having to dash
bashing and mash
the whole fucking nation
just waiting
coming in fast like a train at the station
i got girls but you stick to masturbation

im a master
dont like it coz im faster
im the main meal your just afters
im like vader coz (im your father)
im a skinny kid thats white
wouldnt seem it when my barz are tight
barz are heavy even though im light
cant see me with the hood in the night

im a phantom
most powerful handgun
call me the magnum
no disrespect or you get a slap son
im insane
remember my name
beast that cant be tamed
picture of me on your wall with a gold frame
that's lame
fuck it cut this shit im going to listen to lil wayne


just wanted to see how these bars were im not much of a writer so it takes me a while but just wanted to see how they were if you guys could give me some feedback that would be great

[FAME]

Originally Posted by OriginalGrime

your bars are manic
but get ready to panic
im smashing them like im the titanic
coming in big feeling gigantic
bars are solid
need speed just call me sonic
im on it
coming in hard like comet
bars straight like gin without the tonic

im a young youth 17
coming straight out of the grime scene
go nice fuck it go mean
im going mad turning green
im a hulk smash, splashing the cash
sirens coming closer having to dash
bashing and mash
the whole fucking nation
just waiting
coming in fast like a train at the station
i got girls but you stick to masturbation

im a master
dont like it coz im faster
im the main meal your just afters
im like vader coz (im your father)
im a skinny kid thats white
wouldnt seem it when my barz are tight
barz are heavy even though im light
cant see me with the hood in the night

im a phantom
most powerful handgun
call me the magnum
no disrespect or you get a slap son
im insane
remember my name
beast that cant be tamed
picture of me on your wall with a gold frame
that's lame
fuck it cut this shit im going to listen to lil wayne


just wanted to see how these bars were im not much of a writer so it takes me a while but just wanted to see how they were if you guys could give me some feedback that would be great

Post this as a cypher in the cypher section of the site for people to rate it bruv.

[OriginalGrime]

sorry bruv i dont know how ill go on start cypher but it wont let me press start cypher

[FAME]

Originally Posted by OriginalGrime

sorry bruv i dont know how ill go on start cypher but it wont let me press start cypher

Go to the Cypher drop down button at the top and select Start Text Cypher.

Then choose whether it's gonna be a solo drop, open cypher or private cypher that you'll invite certain people to drop on.

Next, in the topic of the cypher box, just type in whatever you want your cypher to be called.

Then you'll choose the amount of lines/bars for your cypher and you should be ready to click the START CYPHER button.

If that doesn't work for you, report it in the bugs section of the forums and a member of staff will take a look into it for you.