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[Beyond Lunatic]

''You Aint Shit Unless Support On Your Ass''

Assistance Is Like A Spinal;Gripin You Back/
Either You Exhaustin Herbal Or Snifin A Crack/
Cooperation Is Profound Passion From Addiction To Sexual Emotion/
Even Silence Contributes W/ Sound To Output An External Vibration/
Acknowledgement Is An Adversary If You Aint Loyal To Reality/
Get Lost W/ Deepness;Everything Requires Support Even Gravity/
From My Home Recordin Studio To The Technology Soiled For Industry/
Father To Care His Baby And Mother To Enhance Love,Naturally
And ^^^Above^^^ Bolster Is Only Felt Internally Plus Only If Logically
You Fantazie Every Human Being Is Part Of Your Family/
Your Mind Is Someone And Will Be Anyone;It's Too Strange/
So Heart Is The Only Dictionary With A True Meaning Of Friend/
''FRIEND'' Is The Real Synonyms For Help/
Wealth Will Stand Only If Your Pillar Is Health/
There Is Somethin' To Fortify;NoOne Can Do It Self/
Remember You Losin Errything W/O Support;Now Tighten Your Belt/
Rasta Wont Have Bob-Marely If The Lighter Wasnt Kept/
Ground Must Be All Wet Off Semen If There Was No Bed/
Nahmean???Back-Up Is Like Breath;Everywhere You'll Go;Anywhere It'll Blow/
As You Know;We Just Cant Get Rid Off ''AID/AID(s)''....It's Once And For All/

[Beyond Lunatic]

this was a topical verse aganist Catharsis but he didnt show off and now im hungry for feedbacks..drop some!!appreciated!!

[Dono]

Not a bad drop, you could have stuck to the picture better. You got the helping part of it but didn't really elaborate on the gutter (sidewalk? I dunno what it is)/box people aspect.

You're structure still seems reminiscent of battle structure but that's not necessarily a bad thing.

All in all not a bad piece of work, keep at it.

[Lizman]

You Went Back And Forth Between Non Relatable Concepts
One Was Relatable To The Image And The Other One Was About You Smoking