....::Creatures Lies Here::....

[Eye G]

[Hook]
Monsters, how should I feel?
Creatures lie here, looking through the window (2x)

I'm rolling stone on ma magazine to shoot him in Front Page
i'm controling throne of the king very high in a Blunt Wayz
i'm molesting the nacked truth to Hunt Sage-green stuff Blaze
spittin different codes on the mike and a Strong Phrase
coz ima king of the streets ripping king of the south
Attenuating ma enemies stinging their mouth,
I’m spitting hard enuff to rape all pussies in a crowd
I’ll have em slur in their carrier thas what all pussie are bout
i'll make em doubt thruout this battle and ravage their route
n trap em like a street dogs in the cage n phase em out
coz they keep on lying to me so no moo' fake shit now
so slow down yo fucking vehicle and pull the brake kit down
else i bring catestrophe n bring the quake from under the ground
n drop thousand electrical volt of thunder on ya all around
n get ya inside ma lab to crystalize you w/many compound
n have you boil like a water n evaporate ya thru the cloud

[Hook]
Monsters, how should I feel?
Creatures lie here, looking through the window (2x)

creatures are trying to pull the woll over my eyes to
take an advantage but now they are denying thru
their 32 - so i'm developing a new clue to persue
the path to solve em in an Equation..in different Occasion
i'm asian..ya'll be doomed from ma lyrical invasion
i put diss to cease n Transmit Disease
u'll survive yo last breathe when ma Skit Squeeze
the flare on ya'll body decease this is lyrical solar eclipse
creatures are implausible the way they act n react
coz matter of fact they are empty like a Cabbage
only a skin over skin like a fake package
i'm technologically intellectual like charles babbage
i hack emcees w/the help of bag of gauge
i'll bring kim kadershian n shag her on the stage
pleasure is all matter so who gives the fuck to my age ?
n finally bang her like a dynamite ejaculating ma sauge

[Hook]
Monsters, how should I feel?
Creatures lie here, looking through the window (2x)


u call u'r self of G naw u'r justa -G w/invisible AY
the day will be revealed when i go violent n u will die
i code ma rhymes in a different notations
mainstream rappers copy my write/copyrite as their quotations
i make a love w/a pad and she gives a birth to my words
murder the creatures under the earth w/ ma swords
i'll have ma digits played w/ hooks n chores
n publish ma rhymes inside books on stores
liying machines always looks like a whores
they are all vanquished all on the floor...this is how
i bring a complete darkness in a full moon
u must stop acting the one n get back to school soon
theirs no fucking remedy when i drop ma sick
bars off the top of the dome i pop it up quick
so no moo' dick for those Sccubus bitches
only wack em and leave stitches n cause glitches
n this is how GE finishes

i had dropped this as a cypher but got very less fbs so....here it goes..

A slight improvement from the others, but I feel that the topic has little to do with the piece. You had a lot of irrelevent rhyming and off topic spitting, and it never had much to do with 'creatures'. You're wording is still a little off, but being from another country it's expected. Keep improving and keep dropping.