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[ET the Refugee]

So much for week two. It's almost halfway through week 3 and no results and no new assignment.

[X-Calibur]

Originally Posted by ET the Refugee

So much for week two. It's almost halfway through week 3 and no results and no new assignment.

Just on my way home from work and I was away for the bank holiday weekend you can expect your results and week3 assignment later

I Apologise for the delay .....

[X-Calibur]

updated with week 3 and 4 set up ....

good luck to you all

[J8E]

NICHOLAS:4

KILOS: 6

BASICALLY, NICKS OPENING BAR WAS GOOD AND SOME NICE WORDPLAY THERE BUT THROUGH OUT THE BATTLE HE USED ONE SYLLABLE RHYMES AND NEXT TO NO MULTIS AND IT JUST DIDN'T FEEL UP TO THE STANDARDS OF THE OTHER BATTLER. ALSO LETS FACE IT, HE TRIED FORCING THE RHYME 'ABSURD HERE AND BURGER'

KILOS ON THE OTHER HAND CAME IN AND FLOWED AGGRESSIVELY THROUGH OUT AND KEPT MY EYES FIXED OVERALL. HE HAD SOME NICE WORDPLAY AND METAPHORS AND LOTS OF MULTI-SYLLABLE MULTIS.. HE ALSO FLIPPED NICKS BARS A A GOOD FEW TIMES. THE MAIN DIFFERENCE WAS HIS MID RHYME MULTIS E.G heat clips and nines I'll just make sure he "eats-shit-and-dies" like a FEAR-FACTOR-BLOOPER - THESE REALLY KEEP THE FLOW OF THE BATTLE AND PROVES KILOS IS ON ANOTHER ALL ROUND LEVEL AT BATTLING.

[ET the Refugee]

Where is week 3's assignment?

---------- Post added at 01:40 PM ---------- Previous post was at 01:39 PM ----------

^^ maybe I'm not with popular opinion, but at least someone saw what I did.

[X-Calibur]

Originally Posted by ET the Refugee

Where is week 3's assignment?

---------- Post added at 01:40 PM ---------- Previous post was at 01:39 PM ----------

^^ maybe I'm not with popular opinion, but at least someone saw what I did.

All in the original post dude the same as week 1 & week 2 ....

[X-Calibur]

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Yall have until tomorrow for me to grade your week 3's

Get it in fellas !!!!

[ET the Refugee]

Diss: 8 Aksari: 7
Both had excellent verses. My loser had very creative use of Multis and nice personals but my winner had the personals Multis and wordplay as well as more punches and funnier punches. This battle is really a matter of preference though imo because both had very few flaws. By a cunt hair my winner got it.

[BIG DICE]

Week 3 Voting:

EMCEE A (DIZZIT): 8 = I felt that Emcee A was more creative in his verse by the way he incorporated in wordplay that was relevant, his vocabulary was quite good and the punchlines were clean and were clearly understood. His Multies were okay but needs improvement.

EMCEE B (ASKARI): 7 = Emcee B was really good aswell and thought he also incorporated in those elements I've discussed above but felt he lacked in some of those areas such as wordplay and punchlines and needs a little more polishing touches on those but it definitely was a great battle.

That's my vote for Week 3 and hope it's okay. Thanks X.

[RAW DAWG]

EMCEE A = 7

EMCEE B = 7

after reading both a few times, I feel Emcee A had a slight better verse along with the punches and wordplay. EMCEE A is my winner