ViTRiOL = Fair Voters Club? LMAO!

[Skizzo]

That was my point... It's your "opinion" that it's lazy and imperfect, and that's fine because to each his own pimp. But if it's a matter of working gramatically as an oronym... that's fact or fiction, cuz it can actually be measured, know what I mean?


but yeah no problem. Man's verse was the hottest verse in that battle, In my opinion, I'm pretty sure that'd be an accurate enough opinion to state.

[Godbody]

I'd agree that Manhattan had a better verse than me too. If anything I'd say Manhattan's half bodied the opposin verse without mine, and mine was definitely more than good enough to beat Fidel's half, so collectively I don't see how those 2 can get it over us 2 when both of us went harder than the opposition in regards to where our verses correspond in the text box

someone tell me Rican went harder than Manhattan.. I mean thats debatable but a few forced rhymes kinda kill that for me

then someone tell me Fidel's half was harder than mine.. my first 2 lines were the only build up (what u consider filler, even though its relevant to the punch) and after that it was the same scheme and literally punch after punch with every line

the fuck are you smokin Vit

[ViTRiOL]

Originally Posted by Godbody

ViTRiOL what the fuck do you know about a wordplay working in natural speech

If I used that bar in audio it would absolutely fuckin smash and it'd be the one everyone highlights as one of the more solid bars of the verse

it'd smash in URL, KOTD, and GT too. & don't even say it doesnt work in audio because if you thought you were iight in text listen to an audio battle from me LOL

but since its text you got ya lotion out, 5 inch thick spectacles on, and your 8th grade English book


8 pages of your bullshit rhetorical puzzling text questions all for the sake of defending your vote that no other veteran on the website agrees on

again

why the fuck is this nigga FVC

lol

Go on KOTD then and stop whining on here like a faggot.

Thanks @Skizzo, I'm just following what is (in my opinion) the updated consensus of what wordplay should be.

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Originally Posted by Godbody

I'd agree that Manhattan had a better verse than me too. If anything I'd say Manhattan's half bodied the opposin verse without mine, and mine was definitely more than good enough to beat Fidel's half, so collectively I don't see how those 2 can get it over us 2 when both of us went harder than the opposition in regards to where our verses correspond in the text box

You're going to get banned for swaying if you carry on, not my doing or intention dude. You're going to win the battle and Manhattan said you're embarrassing him so how about calming down before you become the Letsbeef Dunce again.

[Godbody]

You don't know what the updated consensus is cuz the vets still run you lil niggas

You win a tournament that nobody good participates in and you're feelin yourself

lmao

[Mani Mula]

Exactly Wordplay stand on its own not the Whole sentence

Alot of wordplays wouldnt make sense if the whole sentence had to be Grammatically Correct

If u notice when Battle rappers do Wordplay they ONLY put Emphasis on the Wordplay Part to bring only that part attention Not the Sentence

Yall tryna judge too damn hard no wonder nun on the hotlist dont got 5 star shit

[Godbody]

I aint swayin. Didnt this thread become about personal opinions? I'm sharing mine

The writing is on the wall for our battle and its as plain as day. I don't have to bump threads to get votes, I don't have to convince everyone on LetsBeef that the sky is blue

This is me asking for a break down of your vote & you've yet to properly defend your case

& This is the majority of the site tellin YOU how wordplay works

You know, accomplished vets, HOF status niggas that have been in HOF crews

You probably just started rappin like 2 years ago prior to that you were reading Harry Potter and playing Warcraft...so I see why you're so obsessed with everything being grammatically correct

but this is fuckin Hip-Hop not a course from Merriam Webster

Originally Posted by Godbody

I'd agree that Manhattan had a better verse than me too. If anything I'd say Manhattan's half bodied the opposin verse without mine, and mine was definitely more than good enough to beat Fidel's half, so collectively I don't see how those 2 can get it over us 2 when both of us went harder than the opposition in regards to where our verses correspond in the text box

someone tell me Rican went harder than Manhattan.. I mean thats debatable but a few forced rhymes kinda kill that for me

then someone tell me Fidel's half was harder than mine.. my first 2 lines were the only build up (what u consider filler, even though its relevant to the punch) and after that it was the same scheme and literally punch after punch with every line

the fuck are you smokin Vit

What half are you talking about? There are no half. Shit is bar for bar. Smh

[ViTRiOL]

Originally Posted by Godbody

You don't know what the updated consensus is cuz the vets still run you lil niggas

You win a tournament that nobody good participates in and you're feelin yourself

lmao

You're a veteran, true. By that I mean old ass fuck. You're not a heavyweight, however.

It should work both ways as a wordplay and both ways as a sentence. That's real wordplay skill. I ain't even going to cuss, it's just the truth but by all means, keep trying to uphold that old school weathered style. It won't get you anywhere nowadays.

[Skizzo]

Nahhh... I wouldn't say "All Wordplays Stand on their own"... Don't confuse what i'm trynna say though homie LOL. I'm saying ORONYMS stand on their own for the most part, Homophones and homonyms are ENTIRELY different types of wordplay that involve the entire setup to be relevant to the sentence formation of the punch to be able to hit hard BOTH WAYS.


Just wanted to clarify that.. I don't want yall to run around saying "Skizzo told me so!" lmfao.


@mani.

[Godbody]

copy+paste from an earlier post + edit

You probably just started rappin like 2 years ago prior to that you were reading Harry Potter and playing Warcraft...so I see why you're so obsessed with everything being grammatically correct

but this is fuckin Hip-Hop not a course from Merriam Webster. WE decide what works because Hip-Hop is based on OUR perceptions, not the perceptions of some fuckin weirdo wigger that has Shakesperian ways

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