hot stuff! Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-04-05 19:05:21

Nice lines Rhet! Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-04-05 20:27:43

No doubt. I don't take opens but I hadn't seen you battle in a minute. props Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-04-05 20:28:26

fv no h8 vb Voted: theASHPEKT / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2012-04-05 20:28:58

DPSSSS Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-04-05 20:29:02

Yeah I'm Rusty as too.. lol Anyways Good battle Rhet, Might need a rematch after this Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-04-05 20:31:18

crazy battle, fv in Voted: theASHPEKT / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2012-04-05 22:45:17

GB NH FV VBF Voted: theASHPEKT / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2012-04-05 23:35:41

-Clever Punches Stole It. *Shrugs* Voted: theASHPEKT / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2012-04-06 00:48:03

FAIRS N VB Voted: theASHPEKT / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2012-04-06 01:49:20

Neither impressed but both had some decent lines. One had nice concepts but didn't execute their punches right due to how they worded their shit and the other had nice concepts and executed punches but didn't really seem to try but still got the job done. Votes in Voted: theASHPEKT / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2012-04-06 03:38:15

no h8..just liked ones complexity more than the others...gb guysfvin Voted: theASHPEKT / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2012-04-06 11:15:14

Some dope ish, one took it with more standout lines tho, both had some creative stuff, props on the battle. Fair Vote. Voted: theASHPEKT / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2012-04-06 11:21:35

class battlke top lines 2 both u but onli 1 can win Voted: theASHPEKT / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2012-04-06 12:22:25

ones punchess/concepts were on a different levvel Voted: theASHPEKT / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2012-04-06 17:27:18

Wow, nice to see K9 back on a grind. He did a lot better than I expected him to do... I am going to be generous with the expo and ratings, because, well, this is one of the only battles that deserves to be here. K9, I felt you had a problem with filla in the first half, you opened decent, but then you lost your intensity, and your verse broke up a bit. Some of your set-ups went to waste and henceforth the punches came out flimsy and unprepared. There was a few forced multies around the centre (Shotty says it proper -> Elevate his Choppa's -> Body's lay in coffins) which took away from the structure quality a little. I did like the scheme, but if you kept it tighter, it woulda been a bit more aggressive and on-top. Your concept conversions got a lot better towards the end, involving more creativity. Touching real dope/Amsterdam, however, is extremely played and overused. Overall, you're in the right direction for shaking off the rust, just a few shakey areas. Rhetorik, I see you went with a less complex style here, which worked for you, but you still added in that extra bit of creativity atop the simplified punches. For example, backflips while erect was a simple punch, but an obscure concept, which I liked: That *could* have been worded a bit better, but yet again, when one thinks long enough, they get the image in their head, haha. First half was real smooth, if not a little simple for your style, but all well executed. The trapped in my narrative scheme was sick, real fluid and readable. I think the golf concept was a little forced, as in, you 'swung' towards the second half of it, and left a rickety path for the primary intention, if that explains it? Well, it was a little forced. Arabic punch was nice and the closer? Nothing wrong with the punch, but he's an Aussie! Haha, yet again, they're all Irish and British inheritants, haha. Still, that was quite sloppy of you. A refreshing read fellas, enjoyed both, but one was on his game here with more swag and a more solid all-round punch game. Always fair. Vitty's votey. Voted: theASHPEKT / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2012-04-06 18:31:25

Both hot one had more punches honestys the policy *UE* Voted: theASHPEKT / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2012-04-06 19:19:50

cool Voted: theASHPEKT / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2012-04-06 21:26:12

both did their thing...vote is for harder punches Voted: theASHPEKT / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2012-04-06 22:27:31

feelin Rhet's last few lines Voted: theASHPEKT / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2012-04-06 22:31:20

Its fair, drippin' in it. Voted: theASHPEKT / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2012-04-07 00:08:42

Bars, both of you Voted: theASHPEKT / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2012-04-07 01:04:31

one was just overall better. no hate fv Voted: theASHPEKT / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2012-04-07 01:34:52

Rhetorik's ender was Really slick man! Like the way it was set up and the mutlie scheme was smooth! Nothing to long of stretched! K9 Had a lot of good punches as well! Liked the amsterdam line myself! Great battle right here, No hate FV!! Voted: theASHPEKT / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2012-04-07 08:36:40

one had harder punches IMO & gm fv no hate...decent drops from both Voted: theASHPEKT / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2012-04-07 10:05:36

fv close. read it twice to be sure. respect Voted: theASHPEKT / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2012-04-07 11:10:23

close battle fairs in Voted: theASHPEKT / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2012-04-07 18:38:49

Anybody not givin these guys a 10 are retarted 5 star easy. Fair ass vote Voted: theASHPEKT / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2012-04-07 20:20:09

Man I can't overexaggerate how unneeded caps are. If someone knows rap, they'll take the time to read your flow and judge it fairly. If they aren't going to, fuck um, don't need their vote anyway. Anyway I voted this way cause one just came harder. Respect yall. Voted: theASHPEKT / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2012-04-07 21:18:10

One took it with multis and overall coherence. No h8. GB fv Voted: theASHPEKT / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2012-04-08 00:32:03

definite fire from both. but one took it! VOTE BAKK Voted: theASHPEKT / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2012-04-08 01:17:39

Dps Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-04-08 11:54:35

GODz GIFT! Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-04-08 20:20:02