..:!:.. The School Of VP ..:!:.

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..:!:..The School of VP..:!:..

Expo: If You Believe Or Would Like To Know If You VP (voting Power) Has Been Reduced And Would Like To Increase It Then You Have Come To The Right Place. Voting Power Is A Rating System The Staff Have Control Over On You To Create A Fairer Place For Everyone To Battle The Staff Introduced VP. If You Are A Poor Voter Or You Don't Leave Expo's, Or Have Been Found To Hate Vote Your VP Can Be Reduced Down To 0 Which Means Your Voting Has No Effect On The Battles. If You'd Like To Prove Your VP Should Be Re-Instated Then Please Read On .....

So The First Month Has Been Completed With School Producing Its First Two Graduates This Will Continue Again For October And Who Ever Would Like To Join Please Post In This Thread To Sign Up. The Way Its Going To Work For This Month Is There Will Be 4 Challenges Each Will Be Posted Straight Away And They Will Be There For You To See. ALL Entries For Each Challenge Will Need To Be Pm'd Directly To Me Quick Link To This Here.


The School Runs Like This ...

CHALLENGE 1
You Will See A Verse In This Thread At The Bottom Of This Post You Will Need To Vote On Who You Think Is The Winner And Post Your Vote Directly To Me Here. After You Have Completed Challenge 1 And You Have Been Given Your Grade For It You May Progress Onto The Next Challenge. The Required Grade For Challenge Is Nothing Below Grade C.

CHALLENGE 2
The Same Applies As CHALLENGE 1 However This Challenge's Verse Will Be Slightly Harder To Judge And Vote On, Again You Will Have To Pm Your Entry Directly To Me To Progress To The Next Challenge. The Required Grade For This Challenge Is Nothing Below Grade B.

CHALLENGE 3
The Same Applies As CHALLENGE 2 However This Challenge's Verse Will Be A 16 Line Verse & Again Slightly Harder To Judge And Vote On, Again You Will Have To Pm Your Entry Directly To Me To Progress To The Next Challenge. The Required Grade For This Challenge Is Nothing Below Grade A.


CHALLENGE 4
So You Have Successfully Attained The Required Grades Congratulations Your Almost At Graduation. For You To Graduate This School You Will Now Need To Provide Evidence Of Everything That Has Been Learnt. To Showcase What You Have Done I Require You Send Me 15 Links To Battles You Have Voted After You Have Competed Challenge 3. I Will Be Able To Tell If Your Cheating As Your PM is Time Stamped And So Will All Your Votes Be. To Help You With Getting Your Votes In You May Also Want To Join .:!:. The Big Vote Off .:!:.


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Once You Have Registered You Need To PM @NOBLE Here With A Battle Link You Have Voted On He Will Then Tell You Your VP Or You Can Get Another Member Of The Staff (list Here) To Tell You Your VP Once You Have Your VP I Will Need To Know What Your VP Is This Can All Be Done Via PM’s Or If Your Not Bothered About Other People Knowing It You Can Just Post It On Here …

So How Will This Work? First Of All We Need To Cover What We Are Voting On When We Read A Battle Verse. These Are Called Categories Some Battles Have Options Available To Select A Score On Them Others Don’t However Even If They Don’t We Should Still Be Taking This Into Account…

So What Are The Categories And What Do They Mean And How Should We Be Judging A Verse Based On These Categories?
The Categories Are As Follows …

1. Wordplay
2. Vocabulary
3. Metaphores
4. Punchlines
5. Multies

Now Instead Of Trying To Give Another Explanation Of These Categories I'm Going To Use Some Of The People Before Me Tutorials And Explanations … Imma Use My Man @Dono If Any Of You Want To Doubt The Dude I Suggest You Check Him Out..

So First Of All Lets Start With That Difficult Section

.. Wordplay ..

Some People Get It Others Don’t Let Me Hand You Over To Dono To Explain More..






.. Vocabulary ..

This Is A Pretty Simple Section, You Are Clearly Rating The Person On There Use Of The English Dictionary Are They Being Creative With There Wording Or Are They Being Kind Of Basic. This Also Falls Into The Multi Syllable Rhymes, Are They Picking The Easy Route By Rhyming One Syllable Words In There Multies Or Are They Adding Complexity With Vocab By Upping There Words And Syllable Counts In Each One.

.. Metaphors & Punchlines ..

These Go Hand In Hand With Punchlines So Let Me Hand You Back Over To The Dude DONO To Talk Yall Threw Punches ….



.. Multies ..

This Is Where A Lot Of New Voters Think Battles Are Won And Lost And To Be Honest If Your Multies Don’t Match And Your Spitting Utter Shit Ya Flow Will Be Ass And Shit Just Isn’t Going To Connect It Is Paramount You Get These Down This Is The Base Of Your Flow It Will Also Dictate Your Set Up For The Punch. Peep The Tutorial Below






Now Aside From These Categories Above There Are Other Things That Come Into Play In A Battle Which We Should Be Taking Into Account A few Of These Videos Are Listed Below These Are Again Aids For You To Understand What You Should Be Looking Out For Whilst Voting...












So Now You Have Read Threw All This And Have Seen The Tutorial Videos And You Think To Yourself Hmmmm Maybe I Could Up My Game On Voting...

All You Need To Do Is Register To Class Then You May Start Your Challenges To Prove You Deserve To Have Your VP Increased ...

So Good Luck

Yours,
The Ambassador

CHALLENGE 1

Ok So Here Is Your First Challenge Below This Text Are Two Verses That I Want All Of You Participating To Vote On As If You Would In The Booth. However This Time Bearing In Mind What Has Been Discussed Above You Need To Give An Expo And A Rating For Each Verse.... This First Verses Should Be Like Chalk And Cheese. So Nice And Easy For You To Pick The Winner. However Moving Forward The Verses Will Become Closer In Comparison To Give You The Opportunity To Show What You Have Learned.

So For Arguments Sake This Is EMCEE A .:V's:. EMCEE B




EMCEE A
im aiming at you idont give a fuck if you bring yo crew no fear in the eyes of the tru seconds are counting down im still standing bullet proof just quit tryin ta hold me down yo lyrics have been slewed this shit you tryn do makes me wanna puke maybe its yo stench up in the booth i smell shit walking sumone spray em with febreeze n release the breeze of a sleeze trying to combat my arsenal of frees is like these hatas trying to fuck with grease whats the matta cant get the game up or wet? i thought you were a beast guess your just a fake artist crying out in plead free again im not worried hatas go ahead n scream


EMCEE B
'Facin ma bars?' feels like he 'DONE-AH-TRIAL' this shit? he 'WON-AH-PILE!' ma lyrics? his 'fear of my distance spittin' makes him 'RUN-AH-MILE'.. Ma shine? like ah bring tha 'SUN-OUT-AN-LIT-THA-BAY' ah bring tha 'GUN-OUT-EQUIPPED-TA-SPRAY' is there ah 'turd in ya mouth?' coz ya never seem ta 'RUN-OUTTA-SHIT-TA-SAY!'.. Ya raps dont 'turn ppl on' they 'REFUSED-YA-CHANNEL' he washes his dick! claims he 'ABUSED-THA-FLANNEL' ppl 'readin ya verse twice' only time anyone 'RE'-VIEWS-YA-BATTLES'.. Tha 'DOUBTERS-AH-PASS' ma punches throw ya 'SOUTH-AN-YA-CRASH' i know ya 'tell tales'(tails) coz ya 'TALK-OUT-YA-ASS'//


After Reading The Verse You Need To Pm Me With Your Vote Title Of The Pm To Be "School Of VP Challenge 1" Your Pm Should Have Something Along The Lines Of...

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EMCEE A = 6
EMCEE B = 4

I Preferred Emcee A Because ....."

CHALLENGE 2

Ok So Here Is Challenge 2 Below This Text I Have Posted Two Verses That I Want All Of You Participating To Vote On As If You Would In The Booth. However This Time Bearing In Mind What Has Been Discussed Above You Need To Give An Expo And A Rating For Each Verse. The First Challenge's Verses Where A Lot Easier To Determine Who Had Won. So Bearing In Mind Your Grade You Got For Challenge 1 And The Feedback I Would Have Given You. Lets Look At Challenge 2 And Approach It With The Mindset Of Achieving a Grade B To Pass It. Good Luck

So For Arguments Sake This Is EMCEE A .:V's:. EMCEE B



EMCEE A (NICHOLAS)
He'll bring the gunplay well GREAT YOUR FIFTH BUST, You're getting Sleighed though watch Nick Deliver Kilos like WEIGHTS FOR CHRISTMAS! You ain't got no RARE SKILL TEXTING THOUGH If you try to Make Fire I'll have you Eating Shit quicker than a BEAR GRYLLS EPISODE! Tryna Acquire Beef but your BORDERING ABSURD HERE just Talking In Boxes like ORDERING A BURGER! We ain't the same 'Calibur' so run for 'Back Up' you CALLING IN THE MURDA!? And I seen your Pet you should MUZZLE THE SLUT I could have your 'Bird Shouting My Name' it just takes a COUPLE OF NUTS!/

EMCEE B (KILOS)
Ok, I'll MURDER-THIS-NERD-QUEER-WITH-FO-FIVES/ Here's a news flash BURGER-AND-ABSURD-HERE-DONT-RHYME! Bitch I stay with then twins like a SIAMESE-SISTER-ACT/ so if I see you and you try to "pull-out" you'll get stuck like a CHINESE-FINGER-TRAP! ha my FIFTHS-CLAPPIN/ you not a gangster I can tell that this BITCH-ACTIN/ you fake prick it's ironic your name is saint nickn but still ain't got a GIFT-RAPPIN!!! I hope lets beef don't think this QUEER-KAT-IS-SUPER/ fuck it I won't just heat clips and nines I'll just make sure he "eats-shit-and-dies" like a FEAR-FACTOR-BLOOPER!!!! Ez

Voting Is The Same As Before However Bare In Mind The Grades I Have Given You And The Critique Of Those Votes And Try To Improve On This Battle .....


CHALLENGE 3

Ok So Here Is Challenge 3 Below This Text I Have Posted Two Verses That I Want All Of You Participating To Vote On As If You Would In The Booth. However This Time Bearing In Mind What Has Been Discussed Above You Need To Give An Expo And A Rating For Each Verse. The First Challenge's Verses Where A Lot Easier To Determine Who Had Won. So Bearing In Mind Your Grade You Got For Challenge 1 And The Feedback I Would Have Given You. Lets Look At Challenge 3 And Approach It With The Mindset Of Achieving a Grade A To Pass It. Good Luck

This Is A GC Tournament Final Verse 16 Lines It Was Dissizit V's Askari


EMCEE A (Dissizit)
F2Dezzy? pfft!... The way you HONOR RULE, SICKENS. I guess he FATHERED YOU BITCHES, You prob'ly somewhere on “Rev Lawn cutting edges” quick as SPONSORED BEAUTICIANS!!(Revlon) But I got BLATANT PLAN, I'M HERE to make comPLACENT FANS AWARE that the structure helping this stupid-guy-write, “Ruins-highlights” like a ANCIENT CHANDELIER! It's publicly noted he's NOT SICK to THA VIEWERS & You only hear “Kar dope!, Indoors” from LOCK PICKing MANEUVERS! So this isn't EVEN A CONTEST we're SEEING YA CONCEPTS that's below “par, phase out”… while you get CREAM'd IN THE PROCESS!(Parfaits) You ain't ready to CLASH IN THE JUNGLE, Even “Problematic kids” know “ASK, IN FOR TROUBLE”!, cos “These Drops, Raised more spirits” than CATS IN A HUDDLE right AFTER A FUMBLE!/ Plus, You never had'a HOE OR A LADY, BRO… You can't “bone a petite slut!”, Which is funny cos thats me & ya moms CODE FOR FELLATIO! (bone appetite,slut) & with CHOPPERS OR SWORDS EQUIPPED Im like MOBSTERS IN GOREY FLICKS, So watch “Blades run its course” til a “Bitch gets Slayed” — OSKAR PISTORIOUS!. Yea, HEARD ALOT OF SHIT yet i got a SURGE OF CONFIDENCE… while the Only folks allowing “Skar to get under their skin” needs a DERMATOLOGIST!

EMCEE B (Askari)
Bruh bruh, this tourney? I've seen the shit you been DROPPING THROUGH IT, acting like this FAG IS A GOON?? Well this 'arm-strong' enough to put a 'MAN ON THE MOON!' (dat's light!) But who you tryna COPY DUFUS?! If those 'punches filled with ROCKET FLUID' then why do they have 'issues with landing' like *CHHHHH*... "We got a PROBLEM HOUSTON!!"/ Y’all see him reaching fuh me?! BUDDY CUT the FUNNY-STUFF-this AINT-WAR you’re just ‘next in line for the drop’ w/o a BUNGEE JUMP to WAIT FOR!!/ Whoo! These are knockout punches! You use ‘KnawkOuts punches’ but it’s a SCALE YOU’LL NEVER TOUCH so when we see ‘Diss usin Chizz' style he 'FAILS TO MEASURE UP!!'/ [disuse inches] New era tryna replicate the LEGENDS smh... your EFFORTS ALL SLUMP! Don’t GET THE WRONG impression I resPECT WHAT Y’ALL BUMP but how can he ‘put in so much work’ and never ‘GET the JOB DONE??’/ 'Will you ever learn?!' Every time you ‘choke’ and YOU R CHALKED OUT when you should’ve ‘CHEWED’ & ROBBED CROWNS? It must ‘eat at your mind’ that there was no ‘NOURISHMENT OFF IT’ I guess you were 'THIRSTY FOR KNOWLEDGE' but lacked the ‘FOOD FOR THOUGHT’ *WOW!*/ That’s the thing bruh, you GET EM PUMPED w/ TEXT N STUFF then LET IT FALL THROUGH so ‘Diss’ appointment in the final?...’ That’s just what’s EXPECTED FROM YOU.../

Voting Is The Same As Before However Bare In Mind The Grades I Have Given You And The Critique Of Those Votes And Try To Improve On This Battle .....


CHALLENGE 4

As Mentioned At The Beginning Of This Thread Challenge 4 Is To Showcase Your Consistency You Have Now Gained In Your Voting Through This School. You Need To PM Me 15 Links To Battles You Have Voted On After Completing Challenge 3. Upon Doing This And Me Reviewing You Links You Will Have Hopefully Proved Your Are Worthy Of Your VP Increase.


Well Done For Making It This Far You May Get Your Name On The Graduates List Below But By All Means Dont Get Your Name On The Drop Outs List.

Thank You,
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Graduates of September 2014

@ET the Refugee
@BROWNCIGAR


Drop Outs


@Proctologist
@JayPrince
@BIG DICE
@Soly
@STaLWaRT
@J8E

[Skizzo]

I'm Skizzo..... & I support this thread.

Yes We Can! Yes We Can! Yes We Can!

This thread also has my support. Good shit X

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@Fidel Z @LOCK @Skizzo

please if you see any shady voters on your travels direct them this way ..

@Craig Low

[Indonesia]

what about set-up relevancy my little wack job boi??

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Originally Posted by Indonesia

what about set-up relevancy my little wack job boi??

its a good point but currently this school is for the basic of basic's people who still rhyme one word and dont know how to structure a rap let them learn the basics of what makes a good verse then later they can learn about making a verse work with all the basic components....

i dont think your point is irrelevant at all but like i said this is for basic's

however if youd like to write a quick brief on set ups id be more than happy to add it ..

.:X:.

sign me up - the fck is vocabulary

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Originally Posted by Row

sign me up - the fck is vocabulary

you dont need to be in this ya fool you in the damn FVC this is for dude with low VP

by all means you can help support me with running it considering youve won fvc of the month a fuck load of times....