Confused By 1 bar

[Just C]

For "Son to be in front of me" he had to really "plan it, or bit" (planet orbit)

Is it just me Or is there a past and present tense issue here?

Surely it had to be

Planned it or bit

Or

Plan it or Bite

I´m not trying to be akward. I just checked the battle after seeing Wish won.

I didn´t even read Askari´s bar. I just wanted to see the winning bar.

But am I missing something here? Or with what I said in mind. Does that Word Play not work 100%, making it a stretch?

[UNKNOWN ARTIST]

He had to really plan it ... Or he bit

He planned his strategy a lot

Both past tense

[Just C]

I dunno I´m reading it and not getting that from it. It´s all good though. it just bugged me. congrats on the win.

[Godbody]

just because he put the word "HAD" before plan it or bit

it probably makes sense. Now if it was HAS instead of HAD we'd have serious tense issues

[UNKNOWN ARTIST]

Think of the "or bit" as an afterthought that's why I put a comma in there if I had space I'd have wrote

He had to really plan it........ Or bit

[Just C]

Aight yeah. I got ya´s. It just read mad wierd the first few times and I couldn´t get my head around it. Like Pulse said it´s the Had before that probably threw me. But yeah it works with Bit as an Afterthought. Like I said wasn´t tryna down play the bar it just threw me n I needed to ask.

Carry on. lol

[Revan]

The "Or Bit" part prolly would of worked better in brackets.

He had to "Plan It" (Or Bit...)

Either way shut up u spanish fannyflap.

[UNKNOWN ARTIST]

Brackets would have been better

[Revan]

RULE > UA

We know this.

---------- Post added at 03:00 PM ---------- Previous post was at 02:59 PM ----------

& Wheres ya excluisve gone?

[Erupt]

The bar flowd n made sense. Congratskies