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"Pennyford Blue"
"Pennyford Blue"
The seven seas never seem short of a tale.
“Let her free!” the vessel leaves, adorning its sails.
Setting forth in a gale against the black of the night
as intrepid waters prevail, they’re carried from sight.
A flagon in right hand, hook in the left,
the captain arrives with rum on his breath.
He stumbles on deck of the Pennyford Blue
for a public address to his cretinous crew.
“To treasure and booty,” came the guttural roar
“If you pledge me your duty, there’s enough for us all!”
The others onboard then clapped as they yelled
in sudden applause for the man at the helm.
Captain LeVell was a porthole of a man
but could look after himself were the moment to pass.
He’d disposed of his hand when at odds to be free,
as Redbeard showed him the plank and he dropped to the sea.
Watching it bleed, he gnawed to find an escape,
- a true seadog with the teeth for a fight, as we say!
Some pirates had claimed he was done and rejoiced
with surprise on the faces of landlubbers ahoy
when they discovered him coiled up one night on the beach
discoloured but buoyed, like them there devices at sea.
The tide doesn’t sleep, though it often relents,
and neither would he as he plotted revenge.
He wanted them dead, reduced to a pulp,
by an ensemble of men with proven results.
A crew of old salts, all colours and creeds,
grouped with hopefuls then took to the sea.
Looking to seek vengeance on Redbeard and his men
cut ‘em to pieces o’ eight and leave ‘em for dead!
Which leads to our quest for Redbeard and his gold
to seasoned adventurers, these seas are their home.
Every beach, every cove, every opening and passage
every secret it holds is known to the captain.
And so the advantage was his in pursuit
as they row with abandon and he considers their move.
The ship and its crew adjusting the bow
as LeVell instantly knew where to look for his foe!
He took to his scope, lookin’ east as the crow flies,
instructin’ his covey to what he’d seen with his own eyes.
Their belief in the old timer proved a trusted source
as they creeped up its lone side and then jumped aboard!
A rush of swords soared through the breeze
as cut-throat corsairs fall to the sea.
They brawl under siege, with both sides losin’ men,
‘til Redbeard’s brought to his knees in a fight to the death!
LeVell had eyes of resentment, cold as the sea,
as it was time to avenge his only defeat.
The very moment he reached for the sheath on his cutlass
he felt a blow that would see him bleed from his stomach.
The greedy curmudgeon had waited alone
to make sure his leader was bludgeoned ‘fore he made away with the gold!
There’s no place for heroes in this grey, timeless, abyss
but that’s the way that it blows -
double-crossed like the flag waved high from the ship...
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"Pennyford Blue"
"Pennyford Blue"
The seven seas never seem short of a tale.
“Let her free!” the vessel leaves, adorning its sails.
Setting forth in a gale against the black of the night
as intrepid waters prevail, they’re carried from sight.
A flagon in right hand, hook in the left,
the captain arrives with rum on his breath.
He stumbles on deck of the Pennyford Blue
for a public address to his cretinous crew.
“To treasure and booty,” came the guttural roar
“If you pledge me your duty, there’s enough for us all!”
The others onboard then clapped as they yelled
in sudden applause for the man at the helm.
Captain LeVell was a porthole of a man
but could look after himself were the moment to pass.
He’d disposed of his hand when at odds to be free,
as Redbeard showed him the plank and he dropped to the sea.
Watching it bleed, he gnawed to find an escape,
- a true seadog with the teeth for a fight, as we say!
Some pirates had claimed he was done and rejoiced
with surprise on the faces of landlubbers ahoy
when they discovered him coiled up one night on the beach
discoloured but buoyed, like them there devices at sea.
The tide doesn’t sleep, though it often relents,
and neither would he as he plotted revenge.
He wanted them dead, reduced to a pulp,
by an ensemble of men with proven results.
A crew of old salts, all colours and creeds,
grouped with hopefuls then took to the sea.
Looking to seek vengeance on Redbeard and his men
cut ‘em to pieces o’ eight and leave ‘em for dead!
Which leads to our quest for Redbeard and his gold
to seasoned adventurers, these seas are their home.
Every beach, every cove, every opening and passage
every secret it holds is known to the captain.
And so the advantage was his in pursuit
as they row with abandon and he considers their move.
The ship and its crew adjusting the bow
as LeVell instantly knew where to look for his foe!
He took to his scope, lookin’ east as the crow flies,
instructin’ his covey to what he’d seen with his own eyes.
Their belief in the old timer proved a trusted source
as they creeped up its lone side and then jumped aboard!
A rush of swords soared through the breeze
as cut-throat corsairs fall to the sea.
They brawl under siege, with both sides losin’ men,
‘til Redbeard’s brought to his knees in a fight to the death!
LeVell had eyes of resentment, cold as the sea,
as it was time to avenge his only defeat.
The very moment he reached for the sheath on his cutlass
he felt a blow that would see him bleed from his stomach.
The greedy curmudgeon had waited alone
to make sure his leader was bludgeoned ‘fore he made away with the gold!
There’s no place for heroes in this grey, timeless, abyss
but that’s the way that it blows -
double-crossed like the flag waved high from the ship...
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10-10-2014, 02:20 PM
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Nice story, nice overall feel of this posting... Interesting topic it's something you don't see everyday on these types of boards.. but when you have been writing as long as you have... I am sure you try to think of as many different topics as possible....to keep the juices flowing....
Nice work as always....
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Nice story, nice overall feel of this posting... Interesting topic it's something you don't see everyday on these types of boards.. but when you have been writing as long as you have... I am sure you try to think of as many different topics as possible....to keep the juices flowing....
Nice work as always....
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@ Baron Mynd I know this is super late and the topical section here is pretty dead, but I just wanted to say that this was extremely original and I thought it was dope. I don't know if you're from another site or what but you've clearly been doing this for awhile. Thanks for posting.
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You rap as good as George Bush justifies war,
And this dead broke bastard gets no laughter
Out late in Central Park lookin' for trenchcoat flashers
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@ Baron Mynd I know this is super late and the topical section here is pretty dead, but I just wanted to say that this was extremely original and I thought it was dope. I don't know if you're from another site or what but you've clearly been doing this for awhile. Thanks for posting.
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#FreeRohaan
"What the fuck is this dude even bustin' rhymes for?
You rap as good as George Bush justifies war,
And this dead broke bastard gets no laughter
Out late in Central Park lookin' for trenchcoat flashers
-Kid Twist
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This was fucking ill man. I think of your better reads and I have to say that this was one of ur best drops to ur collective man. The stretch of originality really was set from start to finish. The overall content was just great. Ur read was also complex yet creative with a nice lucrative scheme thru out man. Props to this. I feel bad it's not getting it's well deserved shine tbh.
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This was fucking ill man. I think of your better reads and I have to say that this was one of ur best drops to ur collective man. The stretch of originality really was set from start to finish. The overall content was just great. Ur read was also complex yet creative with a nice lucrative scheme thru out man. Props to this. I feel bad it's not getting it's well deserved shine tbh.
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Jesus Baron, you've been everywhere bro. This was a dope read, probably the best I've seen on here so far but you're not a LB original so that isn't really saying anything about the Topical guys here. Wording was super smooth and I felt the rhyme scheme was just enough to keep a nice steady pace from beginning to end.
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Jesus Baron, you've been everywhere bro. This was a dope read, probably the best I've seen on here so far but you're not a LB original so that isn't really saying anything about the Topical guys here. Wording was super smooth and I felt the rhyme scheme was just enough to keep a nice steady pace from beginning to end.
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