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Round 1: Deep_elum Vs Student (Deep_elum Wins Via 3-0 KO)
Deep_elum Vs Student
Letsbeef Topical Tournament 2011 Round 1
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GOOD LUCK
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09-14-2011, 01:10 PM
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Round 1: Deep_elum Vs Student (Deep_elum Wins Via 3-0 KO)
Deep_elum Vs Student
Letsbeef Topical Tournament 2011 Round 1
House Rules Apply. Any questions, contact me.
CHECK INS ARE DUE FRIDAY (09-16-11) AT 11:59PM PST. VERSES ARE DUE WEDNESDAY (09-21-11) AT 11:59PM. NO EXCEPTIONS.
(Note: Deadlines are 1 week due to Sandman's tournament round. Other rounds will be shorter)
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Voting Rubix
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GOOD LUCK
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09-15-2011, 03:15 PM
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09-20-2011, 12:02 AM
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I was on the south side of DUNCANVILLE HIGH/ When this bitch walked up and asked if i WANTED TO BUY/ I said buy what? and she saiid THIS BUTT/ I said what? pay me to suck THESE NUTTS/ Keep ya LEGS SHUT, Nobody WANTS THAT/ I rather pay you to be you down with a BALL BATT/ INFACT, the bitch was PRETTY FAT/ but she said the pussys free so I said I'll HIT THAT/ We whent, under the bleachers by the front by the LOUD SPEAKERS/ When she handed me a rag that was coated in EITHER/ I sniffed it, tryed to WALK AWAY/ She reached into my pockets and took ALL MY PAY/ I said HEY BITCH! give me MY MONEY! she hit me in face and then continued ON RUNNING/ Im laughin, even though I know the shit ISINT FUNNY/ Damn... i cant beleave this bitch done took all MY MONEY/...
I was on the north side of DUNCANVILLE HIGH/ When I cought that bitch slippin socked that cunt IN HER EYE/ She swung RIGHT BACK, Layed me OUT FLAT/ Had my homies laughin at me like how you let her DO THAT/ I FLEW BACK, hit that bitch with all that I GOT/ Purple nerpled her tittys kicked that cunt in THE TWAT/ End it with a power bomb and a atomich LEG DROP/ she SAID STOP, but i put her in a camel clutch HEAD LOCK/ Punched that whore in the throat and ask weres my BREAD AT?/ Put my foot in her face and bent her whole HEAD BACK/ Her kneck snaped, didnt EFFECT HER AT ALL/ She REACHED BACK WITH EASE GRABED a HECKLER AND KOSH/ put the STRAP TO MY BALLS, told me to DROP MY DRAWS/ what hit her in the face was the biggest dick she EVER SAW/ Her jaw droped, she screamed "please somebody CALL THE COPS!"/ I grabed that bitch by the hair and comensed a skull fuckin ONSLAUGHT/ NONSTOP, within a MINUTE by the INCHES IT GROWS/ stuck my cock in her mouth and pounded the BITCHS THROAT/ She chokes, a month later student gets A NOTE/ P.S. Im sorry about your mom BUT I NEED MY MONEY HOE!/
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09-20-2011, 12:02 AM
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I was on the south side of DUNCANVILLE HIGH/ When this bitch walked up and asked if i WANTED TO BUY/ I said buy what? and she saiid THIS BUTT/ I said what? pay me to suck THESE NUTTS/ Keep ya LEGS SHUT, Nobody WANTS THAT/ I rather pay you to be you down with a BALL BATT/ INFACT, the bitch was PRETTY FAT/ but she said the pussys free so I said I'll HIT THAT/ We whent, under the bleachers by the front by the LOUD SPEAKERS/ When she handed me a rag that was coated in EITHER/ I sniffed it, tryed to WALK AWAY/ She reached into my pockets and took ALL MY PAY/ I said HEY BITCH! give me MY MONEY! she hit me in face and then continued ON RUNNING/ Im laughin, even though I know the shit ISINT FUNNY/ Damn... i cant beleave this bitch done took all MY MONEY/...
I was on the north side of DUNCANVILLE HIGH/ When I cought that bitch slippin socked that cunt IN HER EYE/ She swung RIGHT BACK, Layed me OUT FLAT/ Had my homies laughin at me like how you let her DO THAT/ I FLEW BACK, hit that bitch with all that I GOT/ Purple nerpled her tittys kicked that cunt in THE TWAT/ End it with a power bomb and a atomich LEG DROP/ she SAID STOP, but i put her in a camel clutch HEAD LOCK/ Punched that whore in the throat and ask weres my BREAD AT?/ Put my foot in her face and bent her whole HEAD BACK/ Her kneck snaped, didnt EFFECT HER AT ALL/ She REACHED BACK WITH EASE GRABED a HECKLER AND KOSH/ put the STRAP TO MY BALLS, told me to DROP MY DRAWS/ what hit her in the face was the biggest dick she EVER SAW/ Her jaw droped, she screamed "please somebody CALL THE COPS!"/ I grabed that bitch by the hair and comensed a skull fuckin ONSLAUGHT/ NONSTOP, within a MINUTE by the INCHES IT GROWS/ stuck my cock in her mouth and pounded the BITCHS THROAT/ She chokes, a month later student gets A NOTE/ P.S. Im sorry about your mom BUT I NEED MY MONEY HOE!/
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09-20-2011, 02:26 AM
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I Guess I'll Use My Text Cypher Tournament Verse...
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09-20-2011, 04:02 AM
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No recycling. Write to the picture!
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09-20-2011, 04:02 AM
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No recycling. Write to the picture!
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09-22-2011, 01:18 AM
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we had to write to the picture?
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09-22-2011, 01:20 AM
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Of Course...
Here's Mine:
So here I was by my DAM SELF walkin' from my FUCKIN' GIRL
even doe I needed MAD HELP I just kept thinkin' FUCK THE WORLD
rain's POURIN' and I'm thinking that I'll prolly GET A COLD
see I'm tryin' to be SOARIN' above really CEPT' I'M TORN
these lions 'side my soul are ROARIN' till peeps are LEFT IN STONES
when I'm exPLORING I always seem to "Break Connects" like BREAKIN' PHONES
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09-22-2011, 01:22 AM
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fuck my bad this is my first topical tournament. If its not to late I'll rewrite my verse
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09-22-2011, 04:54 AM
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I guess Stu made it even then.....so it's open!
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09-22-2011, 04:54 AM
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I guess Stu made it even then.....so it's open!
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Well no need for the voting rubix since neither followed suit, ummm mvgt ELUM for filling his lines- just peep other topicals so u have a better idra next time of what to do-
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