Cringeworthy shit I've seen here recently

[Rain Matrix 1]

Your Fuckin right I'm sorta texting well

http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=tb&id=494602

[Celsius]

Originally Posted by ṠȟȍƋăⓝ

Not even gonna lie, some of the shit I see on here is just horrible. Let me point out of the worst offenses here

He 's green w/ envy, that's the "COLOR OF MONEY Come w/ "All the Right Moves" when I'm TOUCHIN' HIS HUNNY,"Endless Love" how she "Taps" "Knight and day" till i BUST IN HA' TUMMY, - Celsius

bust in her tummy? Really? Are you fucking five? It sounds like something kindergartners would say while having sex. And you're a fucking pedophile for thinking about that

nice title, guess you've been SORTA TEXTIN WELL but facin Row-now-will-make you 'go-down-in-flames" like ORAL SEX IN HELL! - Row

Yes, Row, your signature style is based off of contrived concepts, but this is just next level

KEYS IN IGNITION'S PRIMED for TEAMS IN THE INDY 5!!/nigga PLEASE, YA GIMMICS AINT TITE, thats why my comments 'hit so close to home',it gave ken griFFEY THE DISTANCE TO SLIDE - ILLoKWENT

You're a many-time LBT champion, and still don't understand scheming? Let me explain something to you. It's called inflection. Just because the syllables are the same doesn't mean that it's a fluent rhyme.

Fuck all of you, none of you are on my level in any way

Spar?

[Babylon]

this thread is 10/10

[Celsius]

Originally Posted by Babylon

this thread is 10/10

so is your mother

[Babylon]

Originally Posted by Celsius

so is your mother

Is there even a way you could twist this into being negative?

She's a top notch gal.

[Chef Curry]

suck a dick ether

[S O U L R I T E]

Good points made here from everyone. Everyone has their own interpretation of what good bars look and sound like.

I think the universal rule for a bar is that the little fucker rhymes and makes sense though....

[S T O Y]

"Just because the syllables are the same doesn't mean that it's a fluent rhyme."

Limits to creativity is not a way to thrive. Fuck your fluent rhymes and syllables—you can have the same count for the scheme and one that deviates or straight up chaos or a formal structure—if the delivery, concepts, and creative execution are cohesive, it works. Text is tough for that because you rely on the reader to interpret it, but that's the risk. It's people like you that come in with a bias and fuck up their style just bc it's different.

Now I'm aware for some this is just ignorant rapping, but for others it's an experimentation. Don't be bias or limited. You're gonna stay conventional. Hell some rappers could ditch rhyme all together but if they could make that work, that'd be something creative right there.

I've never read a rhyme in the 8 years of this shit that flowed if it has a broken syllable count.