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kinda touchy considering its a dedication. your hearts in the right place so respect for that but i gotta be honest and say you didnt do a good job. you shoulda wrote and put some real thought into it. on the plus side you got rid of that retarded fake deep voice youve used for years.
learn to stay on topic and how to properly structure your verses around a beat. lost count how many times you were off beat.
props for trying though.
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kinda touchy considering its a dedication. your hearts in the right place so respect for that but i gotta be honest and say you didnt do a good job. you shoulda wrote and put some real thought into it. on the plus side you got rid of that retarded fake deep voice youve used for years.
learn to stay on topic and how to properly structure your verses around a beat. lost count how many times you were off beat.
props for trying though.
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you said like 9 things about her in a 5 minute track.. Gripping glocks, hot ass beats, flow on crack, shouldn't be in a r.i.p. tribute...
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02-08-2013, 07:32 PM
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you said like 9 things about her in a 5 minute track.. Gripping glocks, hot ass beats, flow on crack, shouldn't be in a r.i.p. tribute...
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02-08-2013, 07:45 PM
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r.i.p.shorty p prime you need work written always makes it that much greater on the putting work in part...she was a good person she was a fan of mine as well as i was of her s...reverbantion-and lb she had dope tracks its a sad subject when some one you spoke to or followed with there music passes away...
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Yo Just C I know I went off beat a few times but I get free studio time...Jus' can't be there for long cuz of da cue so I only get 1 shot @ it..Thanks for the feedback doe dude you got talent man...Shit I wish I could be reppin' a better crew...My stats wit' dis acc are lame as fuck...Maybe I should use ProFite...Or maybe not...I jus' decided to start off fresh cuz I thought my audio game would improve .... Now look at me I can only text battle....Oh well allgood I think I'm gonna stick to makin' tracks now...Just C your a vet...Don't forget dat...As for you Punk...I understand where your comin' from a lil bit but on da real doe my hearts in the right place. so chill the fuck out
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Yo Relle I feel you fam...Shit...I'm buggin'.. Jus' can't fully comprehend da fact why she did what she did..Oh well...She be prolly reincarnated now so good for her...Idk...FUCK...I'm skitzing out
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next time write and rehearse THEN get the studio time. if youve rehearsed your bars enough youll know your lines by memory so taking up time in the studio wont be a problem as youll have all your lines memorised and ready to rap right there on the spot.
I know your probably just excited to get behind the mic so dont really plan ahead. but your music will be a lot more polished if you just show a little discipline by planning a head and taking your time. Its difficult enough staying on topic if you write and much more so trying to freestyle a dedication track.
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Word up man...I appreciate your feedback Just C, I'm gonna start memorizing my lyrics tonight...Should be dope,,I'l probably be on a much higher level if I construct fire bars in written form so that's what I'ma do...I might do my freestyles on camera you know
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damn man thats sad shortii p was sexy as fuck too and was actually making moves outside of lb
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Yo Just C Do You THink I'm Good Enough To Be In Pyro Society? I Can't Even Participate In Audio Battles ANymore...I Don't Think I'l Be Doin' Many MOre Text Battles AS I'm Goin' Blind But Fuck It I Still Wanna Make Music Bro..
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Co Sign With Murderous Swag...She Had A Lotta Street Credential And Was Bangin' For Her Age Man...I'mma Fly TO Her HOmetown Sometime This Year TO Get In Touch With Her Homie Kevin Briggz To Shoot Some Videos...Listen To More Bottles On Youtube By Shortii P And Kevin Briggz..It's Pretty Ill
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