FVC Membership Contest Round 3 (Text)

[Student]

I'll Vote Tomorrow Cause Right Now I Looked At The Battle And I Was Like:

[Erupt]

votes in the mix

[NOBLE]

@MadVerbs@Verity@Dave@Dissizit™@Student@BLNK@Ill Phenom Let's get these votes in. Most of these battles only have 10-20 hours left before they close.

[Teek]

Dave's out.

I'm about to do my writeup and expos for all the votes that need covered now for Rnds 2 and 3.

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VOTED@Path vs @UnyqeVOTED
http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=tb&id=443185
Unyqe: ***Kid Lyri: 5 / Pistons: 3
Path: ***Kid Lyri: 3 / Pistons: 3
Expo: Path was more specific in his expo when breaking down each verse and scored each verse a little closer to reality, though Piston's 3 is a little high. Unyqe's expo was what I expect all voters should post, and I'd be overjoyed to see that, but this is for FVC and I expect specifics and detailed examples. New guys NEED MORE EXPO than vets to educate them. You won't overload someone if you lay it out basic and specific. "You did this, you should do this like this".
Props to you both, but a winner is needed.
Pick: Path

[Ill Phenom]

@RhetoriK™, @RULE, @Teek, @NOBLE

Voted.....

[Teek]

@Ill Phenom vs @~SHINIGAMI~VOTED
http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=tb&id=443179
Ill Phenom: ***-xiLeD: 5 / emcjk: 3
~SHINIGAMI~: ***-xiLeD: 6 / emcjk: 5
Expo: Shinigami, my issue with your expo was if you're going to tell someone to fix something, direct them HOW to change it. An expo should be about educating the battler, and even other voters. I felt your expo was basic and lacking of specific direction. Suitable for a regular voter.
Ill Phenom's expo was much more polished with specifics and direction. There's two camps on text 'decoration'. I personally don't see either camp as absolute. I've seen an old great get-to-number-3-all-time-multing-like-this. It's annoying, and I even used it in a battle against him, but it's opinion, I'd stick to facts in voting expos.
Ill Phenom also had a more realistic score for both, which solidified my decision.
Pick: Ill Phenom

[Barack Obama]

I was one of the best members in Just C's FVC.

JS

[NOBLE]

Originally Posted by Punkk

I was one of the best members in Just C's FVC.

JS

You're more than welcomed to reapply at the end of this month.

[Student]

Vizzzzzzzzzzzoted.

[Teek]

VOTED@Student vs @Fiji OsaVOTED
http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=tb&id=443187
Student: ***IndicaL: 5 / Rizzem: 4
Fiji Osa: ***IndicaL: 5 / Rizzem: 3
Expo: Both came really nice on expos and using specifics to teach. The scores were close enough to be fair, but I felt Student went into full breakdown mode to take this. Either expo was quality to earn props, but I have to pick the one that went all in since this is a competition. Good work to both of you.
Pick: Student.