ILLMANIA 4: Topical Battle - Dirty Work Vs Wonderbred Vs Virgil - Page 2 - Lets Beef

**Wonderbred** · #11 06-20-2014, 03:04 PM

How are you gonna decide when this closes? Is it first to a certain number or are you gonna wait till the whole panel votes?

@RULE

**Wonderbred** · 06-20-2014, 03:04 PM

How are you gonna decide when this closes? Is it first to a certain number or are you gonna wait till the whole panel votes?

@RULE

**RULE** · #12 06-20-2014, 05:58 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Wonderbred

How are you gonna decide when this closes? Is it first to a certain number or are you gonna wait till the whole panel votes?

@RULE

first to 5 votes.

**RULE** · 06-20-2014, 05:58 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Wonderbred

How are you gonna decide when this closes? Is it first to a certain number or are you gonna wait till the whole panel votes?

@RULE

first to 5 votes.

**RULE** · #13 06-20-2014, 06:18 PM

Ive invited Dont Flop's @OLD (Olde English) to vote.

**RULE** · 06-20-2014, 06:18 PM

Ive invited Dont Flop's @OLD (Olde English) to vote.

**OLDE ENGLISH** · #14 06-20-2014, 06:37 PM

Both really great. I liked the heroine heroin idea thought it was great but it took a little longer to get to then the first one. I think the first story with the teddy bear was more affective as it goes through a child/adult transition. There weren't as much multis but the actual content compensated for that I think. Personal opinion is they were both really good but i think the story told in the first painted a better picture in my head and I feel thats the deciding factor because if you can get your target audience to relate then you have done your job. Really good read though both did a great job.

**OLDE ENGLISH** · 06-20-2014, 06:37 PM

Both really great. I liked the heroine heroin idea thought it was great but it took a little longer to get to then the first one. I think the first story with the teddy bear was more affective as it goes through a child/adult transition. There weren't as much multis but the actual content compensated for that I think. Personal opinion is they were both really good but i think the story told in the first painted a better picture in my head and I feel thats the deciding factor because if you can get your target audience to relate then you have done your job. Really good read though both did a great job.

**RULE** · #15 06-20-2014, 06:42 PM

OE confirmed the first verse as his vote.

The score is 3-2 atm.

@Jason, @Student & @Just C to vote still.

& im inviting LB Hall Of Famer @Saint Chris to vote too if need be.

1/

**RULE** · 06-20-2014, 06:42 PM

OE confirmed the first verse as his vote.

The score is 3-2 atm.

@Jason, @Student & @Just C to vote still.

& im inviting LB Hall Of Famer @Saint Chris to vote too if need be.

1/

**J u s T C** · #16 06-20-2014, 07:17 PM

Verse 1 took the infintile angle of the image when you look at the dummy "pacifier"

Verse 2 took the more littleral and obvious angle.

I tHought the whole letter thing was silly in execution.

Maybe I'm narrow manded and too rooted in reality for it to NOT irk me

Especially when the now grown mans writing back to his teddy under his bed he supposidly didn't know was there for donkeys years.

If he was selling and still lived at home better believe he had some reason to look under there at 1 point.

Both had good points as well as aspects that irked me when reading but I'm going with verse 2. I thought the ending was a nice way to go out.

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VERSE 2

**J u s T C** · 06-20-2014, 07:17 PM

Verse 1 took the infintile angle of the image when you look at the dummy "pacifier"

Verse 2 took the more littleral and obvious angle.

I tHought the whole letter thing was silly in execution.

Maybe I'm narrow manded and too rooted in reality for it to NOT irk me

Especially when the now grown mans writing back to his teddy under his bed he supposidly didn't know was there for donkeys years.

If he was selling and still lived at home better believe he had some reason to look under there at 1 point.

Both had good points as well as aspects that irked me when reading but I'm going with verse 2. I thought the ending was a nice way to go out.

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VERSE 2