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07-28-2013, 01:21 PM
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You got a lot to work on man. Biggest thing would be confidence. You sound timid as hell. You look almost frightened when your doing it, own that shit man. Plus come up with another filler cuz that "yo yo" sounds pretty wack and youre saying it over and over again. You have some decent rhymes but you werent really going anywhere with them, I get that freestyling can be hard to find direction but if you kind of have something in mind ahead of time you can have some kind of relevancy. Keep at it though man.
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07-28-2013, 01:38 PM
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You got a lot to work on man. Biggest thing would be confidence. You sound timid as hell. You look almost frightened when your doing it, own that shit man. Plus come up with another filler cuz that "yo yo" sounds pretty wack and youre saying it over and over again. You have some decent rhymes but you werent really going anywhere with them, I get that freestyling can be hard to find direction but if you kind of have something in mind ahead of time you can have some kind of relevancy. Keep at it though man.
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nail on the head..
kid needa consider this if he wants to be taken serious in calling and being called out in vid battles.. or battles in general tbh
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07-28-2013, 04:40 PM
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Why don't you do some audio battles on here? Might want to upload an avatar though.
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i will i just hooked up this old desktop computer but i dont got sound on it right now need a cord.. stupid shit but i will once i get the cord
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07-28-2013, 04:40 PM
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Why don't you do some audio battles on here? Might want to upload an avatar though.
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i will i just hooked up this old desktop computer but i dont got sound on it right now need a cord.. stupid shit but i will once i get the cord
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i got it now im bout to go battle
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07-28-2013, 07:42 PM
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i got it now im bout to go battle
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07-28-2013, 08:47 PM
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Why don't you do some audio battles on here? Might want to upload an avatar though.
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He Doesn't need an Avatar don't go around spreading that madness. No Avatar>>>>>
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Why don't you do some audio battles on here? Might want to upload an avatar though.
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He Doesn't need an Avatar don't go around spreading that madness. No Avatar>>>>>
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work on some written too
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He Doesn't need an Avatar don't go around spreading that madness. No Avatar>>>>>
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you;re basically the only original guy known for not having a avatar atm.. yuo dont want a swagger jacker.. lol
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