Topical Championships*-Round 1 summary,Predictions,Name Drops,and More.. - Lets Beef

**Erupt** · #1 11-13-2012, 02:05 PM

Ok so seeing that the two previous champs that were involved arnt in the tourney A NEW CHAMP IS 100% !.

A few cats impressed me in round 1.

Round 1 standouts

@Revan - They way his verse flowed was almost flawless, didnt know his topicals were on this level. Probably the best verse from round 1.The imagery was top notch. Watch the wording a little. Tips: I'd say try to add a little more of a twist to the storyline, maybe the ending, which will be helpful when going against cats like @Dono.

@Enfinite - Your storylines and imagery are dope. Tips: I would work on structure, and also the rhyming . Its one thing to write a good story, its another to do it while still managing a smooth flowing topical with rhyming words throughout connecting the piece perfectly. Maybe shorter lines to fix this problem.

@AfterThought - Was a short piece but I look forward to what you have to offer for round 2.

Verse of the Round- -
@Revan

Round 2 Predictions

RD 2:

@DeathWiSHeZ vs. @NOBLE
(Topic) Abandon
I havent seen much from either. But my moneys on Noble to edge this.

@Dono vs. @Dirty~Work
(Topic) Master Plan
Dono is my bet to win the whole thing.

@reEFer vs. @stricc
(Topic) Behind Enemy Lines
-Will be close. But i Got reef takin this with his smooth delivery.

@Enfinite vs. @Unyqe
(Topic) Invisible
If Enfinite can take the tips I gave him and use them he can be a problem. I have him edging this.

@AfterThought vs. @Revan
(Topic) Crash Landing
-This will be close... I have one edging this based on last rounds performance. Another cat that I see could take this the whole way.

@Magma-flows vs. @GRizzEAT
(Topic) Buried Alive

Idk. Havent seen anything from Grizz. If he does topicals anything like he types then this could get ugly... lol . Nah, should be interesting. No prediction

@Psychotic Defiance vs. @Askari
(Topic) Smugglers Run

Askari's bitch ass will take this.

@EDS vs. -@Dru-
(Topic) Puppet On A String

Idk. Hard to call.

BOTR

Revan vs Afterthought

There you have it. Should be a dope tourney. A new champ will be born. Who will it be????

rupt. OUT

**Erupt** · 11-13-2012, 02:05 PM

Ok so seeing that the two previous champs that were involved arnt in the tourney A NEW CHAMP IS 100% !.

A few cats impressed me in round 1.

Round 1 standouts

@Revan - They way his verse flowed was almost flawless, didnt know his topicals were on this level. Probably the best verse from round 1.The imagery was top notch. Watch the wording a little. Tips: I'd say try to add a little more of a twist to the storyline, maybe the ending, which will be helpful when going against cats like @Dono.

@Enfinite - Your storylines and imagery are dope. Tips: I would work on structure, and also the rhyming . Its one thing to write a good story, its another to do it while still managing a smooth flowing topical with rhyming words throughout connecting the piece perfectly. Maybe shorter lines to fix this problem.

@AfterThought - Was a short piece but I look forward to what you have to offer for round 2.

Verse of the Round- -
@Revan

Round 2 Predictions

RD 2:

@DeathWiSHeZ vs. @NOBLE
(Topic) Abandon
I havent seen much from either. But my moneys on Noble to edge this.

@Dono vs. @Dirty~Work
(Topic) Master Plan
Dono is my bet to win the whole thing.

@reEFer vs. @stricc
(Topic) Behind Enemy Lines
-Will be close. But i Got reef takin this with his smooth delivery.

@Enfinite vs. @Unyqe
(Topic) Invisible
If Enfinite can take the tips I gave him and use them he can be a problem. I have him edging this.

@AfterThought vs. @Revan
(Topic) Crash Landing
-This will be close... I have one edging this based on last rounds performance. Another cat that I see could take this the whole way.

@Magma-flows vs. @GRizzEAT
(Topic) Buried Alive

Idk. Havent seen anything from Grizz. If he does topicals anything like he types then this could get ugly... lol . Nah, should be interesting. No prediction

@Psychotic Defiance vs. @Askari
(Topic) Smugglers Run

Askari's bitch ass will take this.

@EDS vs. -@Dru-
(Topic) Puppet On A String

Idk. Hard to call.

BOTR

Revan vs Afterthought

There you have it. Should be a dope tourney. A new champ will be born. Who will it be????

rupt. OUT