Cypher that i'm working on.

[MadVerbs]

Ayo, listen.. making it isn't easy, theres things you have to earn and people you have to meet but everyday theres something you'll learn yet you have to think. You can't kick back.. relax with a six-pack erryday of the week.. nah mean you have to get cash.. real fast & if you rap then make tracks n beats! Being lazy in the rap game doesn't work so how the fuuuuck can you be lazy w/ real life? lol You gotta be crazy & kill mics.. pick up ladies that be looking real nice & mu'fuckers thinking they fly ..they best think twice! Tbh i aint a cold killer but I'll take lifes if theres a reason.. make guys that start lifes then start leaving rest in the sky because why make a life if you don't plan to feed it.. give it room to survive & believe in it! REAL SHIT. Take pride and stay for the ride nah meaan! Otherwise yous a sucka.. a punk little bitch leaving a baby n the mother ..n probably fo' another chick. & what's up with ya'll thinking school, bills and shit like that isn't g? Shiit don't hate because dudes be doing what you can't be.. because while you're booing they're moving state to state.. seeing land & making g's

It's def not done.. but can I get some feedback on this shit.
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It's cool, could use some polishing in my opinion. Maybe it's your pronunciation that throws me off cause we have different styles, but it's good for a start, would definitely like to read the finished piece though. Liked a few of the references and shit but overall this was just decent, like I said it'd def be dope to read it when it's finished, but keep up the good writes.