Killz's Scheme Verse

[ViTRiOL]

I'm not hating or being a bad egg, I'm just saying, it's mad unfair that he's written a 4 syllable scheme, said it's 3 syllables minimum (which it isn't), and he's probably gonna win the battle due to his name and his moderator status.

3 syllable mininum. How does that make any sense in context to the concept of the tourney? Rhetorik clearly stated a 3 syllable scheme of your choice. I think it should be an auto-win to Savage, real talk.

@RhetoriK™ @Itz Killz

[Just C]

Hmmmm this could get interesting. Though from what I remember it didn't say anything about a 'minimum of 3 syllables'

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I thought the point of this was to have a set amount of syllables to restrict the writers making it more of a test, but we'll see what Rhet has to say.

[Krhyme Killz]

whats REALLY interesting is that in the actual official thread i asked about doing more and yall both said that was a silly question....fuck is yall stupid?

howabout this...just fucking read the last three of my four rhyming multies and stop swaying my shit...this is fucking sad yo

[Just C]

I'm stupid?

[Krhyme Killz]

you tell me yo

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lol...this is actually irking me for some reason

[Phroxen]

Was gonna save this for a PM but fuck it. It can go here.

Everything you said was true, and I didn't expect Killz to do that. What I expected him to do was have three stressed syllables, with anything he wanted before them. Instead, he used four syllables.. stressed the first and the last only, and left the middle two unstressed. That's just a plain ass 4-syllable multi.. slanting the second and third syllables (which, as far as scheming goes, is a weak 4-syllable multi), so dude, you're only rhyming two syllables. I re-read your verse to try to find a consistent 3-syllable scheme.. but there wasn't one. Your verse was fuckin solid, don't get me wrong. And verse for verse, yeah you bodied Savage. But as far as 3-syllable schemes go, Savage outclassed you.

And this isn't a bitching and moaning post.. it's more of a: I know Killz will get votes regardless of what he posts, just because people like him.. but the rules weren't followed.

Bending rules is cool if you can do it correctly. Shitting on them and lying isn't.

[Krhyme Killz]

yo...did i...or did i NOT ask it in the thread...in plain English...can you do more than 3?

yall act like i somehow skirted shit..if anything...i only upped the level of difficulty...

how do i gain an advantage by OVERDOING shit?

[Just C]

Actually nah that's not strictly true. by going out of the confines you gave yourself more options making it easier for yourself. The rule is there to restrict and test.

And tbh I thought u was trolling when u asked if it was a 3 minimum. Especially as u posted right after I trollingly asked if my internal rhymes need to stick to the same scheme. Bad timing I guess lol.

[Krhyme Killz]

@Phro...cmon, b...uncapping a portion of a multi set is different than what i did how?

lol...dont underestimate readers yo...if it flows (and it does) niggas gon read it the same way

[BTD]

IMO 4 syllables is an advantage over3 n I could think of better setups n punches wit longer schemes