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@ Huey if you would like to track battle, we can arrange that...
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lol you would lose. even if you won, i know you lose. Ok since you want me to tell you WHY your music sucks i will.
Beautiful life:
first of all. The hook sounds like some gay new age hip hop shit. The predictable 8th note piano chords goin on in the background with the big kick and snare beat.
your first lyrics.
"im alive another day, where the lions come to play. and the iron guns i spray kids are lyin up in graves."
what. the. fuck. are you talking about? Your talking about a beautiful life? no, your talking about lions and guns then some kid dying in a rave. then you hate on haters, and end it with saying they know nothing about the beautiful life....
so heres the thing. Your saying nothing, your just hating on other rappers and hyping yourself (second verse has even less content than the first). Your rhyme patters are weak to decent, and mostly predictable. if not predictable, they don't rhyme. You fall off the beat multiple times and the beat itself is a new age kid kudi/wannabe anthem rapper knock off. BASICALLY, your trying to be a style that sucks in the first place. even if i DID want to listen to that corny rap style, id listen to people that are better at it than you...
you happy now?
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08-28-2011, 08:15 PM
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lol you would lose. even if you won, i know you lose. Ok since you want me to tell you WHY your music sucks i will.
Beautiful life:
first of all. The hook sounds like some gay new age hip hop shit. The predictable 8th note piano chords goin on in the background with the big kick and snare beat.
your first lyrics.
"im alive another day, where the lions come to play. and the iron guns i spray kids are lyin up in graves."
what. the. fuck. are you talking about? Your talking about a beautiful life? no, your talking about lions and guns then some kid dying in a rave. then you hate on haters, and end it with saying they know nothing about the beautiful life....
so heres the thing. Your saying nothing, your just hating on other rappers and hyping yourself (second verse has even less content than the first). Your rhyme patters are weak to decent, and mostly predictable. if not predictable, they don't rhyme. You fall off the beat multiple times and the beat itself is a new age kid kudi/wannabe anthem rapper knock off. BASICALLY, your trying to be a style that sucks in the first place. even if i DID want to listen to that corny rap style, id listen to people that are better at it than you...
you happy now?
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08-28-2011, 08:32 PM
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Originally Posted by Huey J
lol you would lose. even if you won, i know you lose. Ok since you want me to tell you WHY your music sucks i will.
Beautiful life:
first of all. The hook sounds like some gay new age hip hop shit. The predictable 8th note piano chords goin on in the background with the big kick and snare beat.
your first lyrics.
"im alive another day, where the lions come to play. and the iron guns i spray kids are lyin up in graves."
what. the. fuck. are you talking about? Your talking about a beautiful life? no, your talking about lions and guns then some kid dying in a rave. then you hate on haters, and end it with saying they know nothing about the beautiful life....
so heres the thing. Your saying nothing, your just hating on other rappers and hyping yourself (second verse has even less content than the first). Your rhyme patters are weak to decent, and mostly predictable. if not predictable, they don't rhyme. You fall off the beat multiple times and the beat itself is a new age kid kudi/wannabe anthem rapper knock off. BASICALLY, your trying to be a style that sucks in the first place. even if i DID want to listen to that corny rap style, id listen to people that are better at it than you...
you happy now?
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I actually said "the iron guns'll spray" ...which means I'm basically thankful to be alive. The line about the kid dying in a rave was from a real life experience I had with a kid I knew, who had alot of potential, and ended up dying from an extacy OD. I'm basically trying to tell people to slow down and try to savor moments in life and enjoy the time they have on earth, and how haters spend too much time worrying about what others are doing, and lose grip of the life they have... but I guess you couldn't see that.
2nd verse: I talk about how people envy me, but they talk about bullshit in their songs, and lack substance, so they're irrelevant to me. kids and mothers who are trying to rise up out of the problems they face in life, and how they will get to see the "beautiful life" if they don't lose sight of it... Again, I guess you couldn't see THAT either.
Basically, the song is about slowing down and not moving to fast, and missing out on the finer things in life.
And I've been told by many people that song was one of the best songs they've heard in a long time, so you're comments do not affect me.
I'm sorry you're stuck in the 90s with your trash ass beats, but don't get mad at me for getting on some new shit.
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lol you would lose. even if you won, i know you lose. Ok since you want me to tell you WHY your music sucks i will.
Beautiful life:
first of all. The hook sounds like some gay new age hip hop shit. The predictable 8th note piano chords goin on in the background with the big kick and snare beat.
your first lyrics.
"im alive another day, where the lions come to play. and the iron guns i spray kids are lyin up in graves."
what. the. fuck. are you talking about? Your talking about a beautiful life? no, your talking about lions and guns then some kid dying in a rave. then you hate on haters, and end it with saying they know nothing about the beautiful life....
so heres the thing. Your saying nothing, your just hating on other rappers and hyping yourself (second verse has even less content than the first). Your rhyme patters are weak to decent, and mostly predictable. if not predictable, they don't rhyme. You fall off the beat multiple times and the beat itself is a new age kid kudi/wannabe anthem rapper knock off. BASICALLY, your trying to be a style that sucks in the first place. even if i DID want to listen to that corny rap style, id listen to people that are better at it than you...
you happy now?
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I actually said "the iron guns'll spray" ...which means I'm basically thankful to be alive. The line about the kid dying in a rave was from a real life experience I had with a kid I knew, who had alot of potential, and ended up dying from an extacy OD. I'm basically trying to tell people to slow down and try to savor moments in life and enjoy the time they have on earth, and how haters spend too much time worrying about what others are doing, and lose grip of the life they have... but I guess you couldn't see that.
2nd verse: I talk about how people envy me, but they talk about bullshit in their songs, and lack substance, so they're irrelevant to me. kids and mothers who are trying to rise up out of the problems they face in life, and how they will get to see the "beautiful life" if they don't lose sight of it... Again, I guess you couldn't see THAT either.
Basically, the song is about slowing down and not moving to fast, and missing out on the finer things in life.
And I've been told by many people that song was one of the best songs they've heard in a long time, so you're comments do not affect me.
I'm sorry you're stuck in the 90s with your trash ass beats, but don't get mad at me for getting on some new shit.
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08-28-2011, 08:35 PM
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*Coughs* Track diss each other already....Fck comparing tracks lol....Though i can't really say anything because my entry sounds like a shitty quality battle lmao #Just saying
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08-28-2011, 09:22 PM
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08-28-2011, 09:41 PM
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heh dont spam my thread plz... if you get into an argument atleast keep it to a 1 page minimum... hurts my finger when i have to delete squabble
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Submissions have closed for this contest... Moving forward with those who got them in... Want to thank and congratulate everyone who participated on a job well done... Will be announcing our winners on September 1st... Look for the winners thread that will be posted... THREAD CLOSED.
edit: Winners have been posted early.. Check it out http://www.letsbeef.com/forums/showt...503#post671503
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