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Yo punk youre going after the wrong niggas .. direct ur hate at the niggas responsible
Namely, every green/red name
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Text lounge crips motherfucker
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05-23-2016, 06:11 PM
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Yo punk youre going after the wrong niggas .. direct ur hate at the niggas responsible
Namely, every green/red name
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Text lounge crips motherfucker
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05-23-2016, 06:13 PM
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I wrote mine in 30 minutes from scratch
Ur going 2nd and taking days to write it
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I make fun of yer shit and you get defensive....haha. I didn't tell u to send me an 8 that took you 30 seconds. Ya did that yerself. I'll get to it later on when I feel like taking time to write. Til then.....Im on my Michael Jackson shit right now.....just here to read the comments.
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05-23-2016, 06:13 PM
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I wrote mine in 30 minutes from scratch
Ur going 2nd and taking days to write it
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I make fun of yer shit and you get defensive....haha. I didn't tell u to send me an 8 that took you 30 seconds. Ya did that yerself. I'll get to it later on when I feel like taking time to write. Til then.....Im on my Michael Jackson shit right now.....just here to read the comments.
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05-23-2016, 06:27 PM
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I aint read much of anything anyone has said...but since ya made it a public issue and I got a minute to burn, Ill throw my two cents in. Whether or not you care is up to you but I dont even know you so this is about as objective as it gets.
Slant is necessary....I do as much as anyone but LARGEST and DOLLAR don't really work. I see where the rhymes were in the first line though everyone is so used to reading all caps it seems some dont know how to go without it at times. The Macc and Cheese bit was a decent concept but the play was off. If he smiles, Macs cheesin...not Mac n Cheesin. Macc's battled about a million times....the Mac/Apple/computer concepts are about as obvious as they come. Dont be surprised that no one is impressed with that. The PC wordplay was weak and forced and the fact he went from being a Mac to PCing himself together back to a Mac that became an actual apple in the span of a line and a half...nah, homie...that's redundant and disconnected at the same time, and thats tough to manage. Ya got good ideas and rhymed mostly well but it just wasnt getting tied together. Take that how ya want to.
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Perfect two cents, actually.
I wasn't actually aware his name use to be MaCc at some point. I came back to 1 Finga. I could definitely see how they're played concepts no doubt, didn't know they would've already been referenced toward him. I honestly just put in the "just enough" effort and tried to deliver them in a not-so played way while still sticking to the Nameplay Battle concept we had going into it. I was trying to come at his name in every aspect of the verse, I ran out of quality ideas but thought it'd due.
The PCing bit, like I said, is forced but blah blah. It's suppose to have a contradicting context. Having "MaCc PCing himself together" wouldn't make a contradictory product, which I was trying to emulate into the "pretend hes a God" bit bc him calling himself a God is contradictory to the fact that he's just a basic human being. I know pretty elaborate right?
All in all, I am taking the feedback seriously.
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I wrote mine in 30 minutes from scratch
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You talking shit about a dead site and then get on someones ass for taking a day or two to write shit for you.
People got lives and moods, not everyones gotta constantly be in a creative writing mood and set aside shit in their life to get at an internet rapper's 4 bars.
At least I had an existential problem with my creative process, that has life implications. You're whining about some kid ignoring you on that dead battling website. If he's taking so long, improve on your 30 minute dump while you wait or take your time instead of being so up-tight about due dates, I'm sure you got other shit beside sitting on LB in the meantime
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i told you stoy was handsome
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05-23-2016, 06:27 PM
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I aint read much of anything anyone has said...but since ya made it a public issue and I got a minute to burn, Ill throw my two cents in. Whether or not you care is up to you but I dont even know you so this is about as objective as it gets.
Slant is necessary....I do as much as anyone but LARGEST and DOLLAR don't really work. I see where the rhymes were in the first line though everyone is so used to reading all caps it seems some dont know how to go without it at times. The Macc and Cheese bit was a decent concept but the play was off. If he smiles, Macs cheesin...not Mac n Cheesin. Macc's battled about a million times....the Mac/Apple/computer concepts are about as obvious as they come. Dont be surprised that no one is impressed with that. The PC wordplay was weak and forced and the fact he went from being a Mac to PCing himself together back to a Mac that became an actual apple in the span of a line and a half...nah, homie...that's redundant and disconnected at the same time, and thats tough to manage. Ya got good ideas and rhymed mostly well but it just wasnt getting tied together. Take that how ya want to.
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Perfect two cents, actually.
I wasn't actually aware his name use to be MaCc at some point. I came back to 1 Finga. I could definitely see how they're played concepts no doubt, didn't know they would've already been referenced toward him. I honestly just put in the "just enough" effort and tried to deliver them in a not-so played way while still sticking to the Nameplay Battle concept we had going into it. I was trying to come at his name in every aspect of the verse, I ran out of quality ideas but thought it'd due.
The PCing bit, like I said, is forced but blah blah. It's suppose to have a contradicting context. Having "MaCc PCing himself together" wouldn't make a contradictory product, which I was trying to emulate into the "pretend hes a God" bit bc him calling himself a God is contradictory to the fact that he's just a basic human being. I know pretty elaborate right?
All in all, I am taking the feedback seriously.
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I wrote mine in 30 minutes from scratch
Ur going 2nd and taking days to write it
Unbelievable
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You talking shit about a dead site and then get on someones ass for taking a day or two to write shit for you.
People got lives and moods, not everyones gotta constantly be in a creative writing mood and set aside shit in their life to get at an internet rapper's 4 bars.
At least I had an existential problem with my creative process, that has life implications. You're whining about some kid ignoring you on that dead battling website. If he's taking so long, improve on your 30 minute dump while you wait or take your time instead of being so up-tight about due dates, I'm sure you got other shit beside sitting on LB in the meantime
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Yo whT is this , yall ganging up on the only decent member ?
Ima let it go I'm on hiatus after this battle , unless I get that mod spot
Til then
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Oh and stoy I didn't vote on ur battle w/ macc cuz u lost. U voted for me so I did u a solid and didn't vote
Ur wack, bro
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Idk why u made this thread , lol I didn't read ur original post but ima assume u felt wronged for losing
It was a legit loss
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"PCing" lmao
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05-23-2016, 07:03 PM
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Yo whT is this , yall ganging up on the only decent member ?
Ima let it go I'm on hiatus after this battle , unless I get that mod spot
Til then
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Oh and stoy I didn't vote on ur battle w/ macc cuz u lost. U voted for me so I did u a solid and didn't vote
Ur wack, bro
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Idk why u made this thread , lol I didn't read ur original post but ima assume u felt wronged for losing
It was a legit loss
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"PCing" lmao
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^^^Yet nobody wants track beef with Punk..lol
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Except Mani who owned Punk so bad that Punk responded to him with gospel music. The only track beefs Punk's even tried to start is against Pugz, who doesn't know what a personal or bar is, and me, who is a horrendous rapper. Punk's never went after someone who can actually rap and the one time he had that opponent, he bitched out of responding with a diss track.
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Yea, it just always came off corny to me. Did you always believe it was fake or were you upset when they let it be known?
Regardless that statement you made was intended to be an insult (aka a punch). But I think I finally get what you're talking about with the punchline lol. Regardless, the punch was more-so in the 'PCing himself together' rather than the narcissism jab.
I admit the PCing shit is def forced, I'd give a rapper benefit of the doubt a little for the sake of the line though. It doesn't always have to be perfect if you know what they mean. Audibly, you can mesh it pretty well. At least I didn't try The for D or milk if mac needs ya for milk of magnesia.. jesus.
I did spend a couple hundred on tuition for some nice Web Design classes. The importance of skin design is pretty substantial in recent UX studies when it comes to attracting traffic. That and marketing, which nobody does on this site. You should have an active social aspect to this that reaches beyond just LB. Idek cyphers and crews didn't work.
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Always knew it was fake. Anyone with eyes always knew it was fake. The problem with PCing is....how do you PC yourself? I get that your wordplay is piecing, but wordplay has to work both ways (tell that to every top battler on the site in 2016 though lol). Also PCing and Piecing obviously don't sound the same.
It does always have to make sense. PCing is definitely worst than milk of magnesia.
Marketing is 99.9% of what I keep banging on about, but the closest the staff on this site get to running anything successfully is running out of members.
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05-23-2016, 07:30 PM
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^^^Yet nobody wants track beef with Punk..lol
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Except Mani who owned Punk so bad that Punk responded to him with gospel music. The only track beefs Punk's even tried to start is against Pugz, who doesn't know what a personal or bar is, and me, who is a horrendous rapper. Punk's never went after someone who can actually rap and the one time he had that opponent, he bitched out of responding with a diss track.
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Originally Posted by M I L K
Yea, it just always came off corny to me. Did you always believe it was fake or were you upset when they let it be known?
Regardless that statement you made was intended to be an insult (aka a punch). But I think I finally get what you're talking about with the punchline lol. Regardless, the punch was more-so in the 'PCing himself together' rather than the narcissism jab.
I admit the PCing shit is def forced, I'd give a rapper benefit of the doubt a little for the sake of the line though. It doesn't always have to be perfect if you know what they mean. Audibly, you can mesh it pretty well. At least I didn't try The for D or milk if mac needs ya for milk of magnesia.. jesus.
I did spend a couple hundred on tuition for some nice Web Design classes. The importance of skin design is pretty substantial in recent UX studies when it comes to attracting traffic. That and marketing, which nobody does on this site. You should have an active social aspect to this that reaches beyond just LB. Idek cyphers and crews didn't work.
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Always knew it was fake. Anyone with eyes always knew it was fake. The problem with PCing is....how do you PC yourself? I get that your wordplay is piecing, but wordplay has to work both ways (tell that to every top battler on the site in 2016 though lol). Also PCing and Piecing obviously don't sound the same.
It does always have to make sense. PCing is definitely worst than milk of magnesia.
Marketing is 99.9% of what I keep banging on about, but the closest the staff on this site get to running anything successfully is running out of members.
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Lol EtH trying his hardest with all these stories. That's how you know a nigga losing when you just start talking out ya ass. Either way, I took W's. Y'all seen what I can do. Ya fear that. You the ONLY person that think Mani "owned" me because you fighting for ya reputation right now lmao. I bring the bitchness out you coward ass lil boys.
@ Rain Matrix 1 those days were poppin my nig lol. Had the entire site buzzin over that
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People forgetting that the mods picked the beats themselves. Don't blame me, blame them. I just dropped art on it
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05-23-2016, 08:08 PM
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Lol EtH trying his hardest with all these stories. That's how you know a nigga losing when you just start talking out ya ass. Either way, I took W's. Y'all seen what I can do. Ya fear that. You the ONLY person that think Mani "owned" me because you fighting for ya reputation right now lmao. I bring the bitchness out you coward ass lil boys.
@ Rain Matrix 1 those days were poppin my nig lol. Had the entire site buzzin over that
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People forgetting that the mods picked the beats themselves. Don't blame me, blame them. I just dropped art on it
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05-23-2016, 08:26 PM
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Esso vs rain .... feel free to hate vote
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Feel free to hate vote cuz that's the only chance the nigga stands
+ The mods are too lazy to do anything about it anyways so why not
#FtheMods
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05-23-2016, 08:26 PM
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Feel free to hate vote cuz that's the only chance the nigga stands
+ The mods are too lazy to do anything about it anyways so why not
#FtheMods
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Punk bout to hit us with a hallelujah, watch out homies.
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05-23-2016, 08:37 PM
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Punk bout to hit us with a hallelujah, watch out homies.
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Eth craves backup lmao always talking about US as if someone supports his filthy ass.
Take a bath, you hyper active animal
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05-23-2016, 10:50 PM
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Eth craves backup lmao always talking about US as if someone supports his filthy ass.
Take a bath, you hyper active animal
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Punk hits people with dope disses like "Take a bath". #PWNED
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05-23-2016, 10:56 PM
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Punk hits people with dope disses like "Take a bath". #PWNED
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