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10-20-2014, 09:04 AM
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I need help spreading this cyph round. It's a continuation of my first cypher ever on the site. This is like a big deal to me. I would appreciate the feedback more than anything. For those who have read the first one, Idk if you'll think this is better than the first, it goes down to what u believe, but I tried my best not to disappoint y'all with this one.
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10-21-2014, 07:10 AM
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10-21-2014, 07:22 AM
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U need to stop breaking multis and stop capitalzing random words that aren't a multi scheme. Back to basics
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10-21-2014, 07:23 AM
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are u Phoenix? Jw
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10-21-2014, 07:29 AM
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No, idk who that is. But i was gonna read ur shit but couldn't just because the random capitalizations and broken multis got on my nerves.
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10-21-2014, 07:43 AM
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U need to stop breaking multis and stop capitalzing random words that aren't a multi scheme. Back to basics
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Give me a break..I haven't been on the site for almost a year now until like the end of last month. If you knew what I do to get these verses out, you'd probably show me a little more respect.
I've been without internet at my house for the past 3-4 months. I walk to random places in my area that offer wi-fi connection, no matter the weather (I've been rained on like 5 times now) in the freezing cold just to get my word out. My laptops died on me in the process more than once so I've had to walk all the way back home from MILES away just to charge it back up then walk all the way back just to put it out.
Btw, I'm rusty af right now, I need a crew surrounded by top-tier vets who can guide me to my max potential, cuz I can learn..just time and help is all I need.
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10-21-2014, 07:43 AM
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U need to stop breaking multis and stop capitalzing random words that aren't a multi scheme. Back to basics
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Give me a break..I haven't been on the site for almost a year now until like the end of last month. If you knew what I do to get these verses out, you'd probably show me a little more respect.
I've been without internet at my house for the past 3-4 months. I walk to random places in my area that offer wi-fi connection, no matter the weather (I've been rained on like 5 times now) in the freezing cold just to get my word out. My laptops died on me in the process more than once so I've had to walk all the way back home from MILES away just to charge it back up then walk all the way back just to put it out.
Btw, I'm rusty af right now, I need a crew surrounded by top-tier vets who can guide me to my max potential, cuz I can learn..just time and help is all I need.
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10-21-2014, 07:51 AM
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Dope, work on multies an flow u got potential keep at it.
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10-21-2014, 07:51 AM
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Dope, work on multies an flow u got potential keep at it.
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10-21-2014, 08:37 AM
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I'm not hating like I said it didn't read " easy" or fluently to me, I thought it lacked clarity
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10-21-2014, 01:05 PM
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I need a crew surrounded by top-tier vets who can guide me to my max potential, cuz I can learn..just time and help is all I need.
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You had your chance and you fucked off to 9 Circles with Phe! lol
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10-21-2014, 01:05 PM
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I need a crew surrounded by top-tier vets who can guide me to my max potential, cuz I can learn..just time and help is all I need.
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You had your chance and you fucked off to 9 Circles with Phe! lol
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10-21-2014, 02:53 PM
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If you knew what I do to get these verses out, you'd probably show me a little more respect.
I've been without internet at my house for the past 3-4 months. I walk to random places in my area that offer wi-fi connection, no matter the weather (I've been rained on like 5 times now) in the freezing cold just to get my word out. My laptops died on me in the process more than once so I've had to walk all the way back home from MILES away just to charge it back up then walk all the way back just to put it out.
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That doesn't earn respect. thats just lame as fuck. get your priorities straight and your money in order ffs man you making me depressed.
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Fuck off, I got work to do.
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10-21-2014, 02:53 PM
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If you knew what I do to get these verses out, you'd probably show me a little more respect.
I've been without internet at my house for the past 3-4 months. I walk to random places in my area that offer wi-fi connection, no matter the weather (I've been rained on like 5 times now) in the freezing cold just to get my word out. My laptops died on me in the process more than once so I've had to walk all the way back home from MILES away just to charge it back up then walk all the way back just to put it out.
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That doesn't earn respect. thats just lame as fuck. get your priorities straight and your money in order ffs man you making me depressed.
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