..:!:.. The School Of VP ..:!:.

[Silver Dollar Sam]

Yo @X-Calibur can i get in Fam???

[X-Calibur]

so week 1 is done thankfully all those who took part passed well done guys now onto your week 2 assignments the verses aren't as easy as it was in week 1 im expecting some mixed responses here....

good luck ....

@Proctologist
@ET the Refugee
@JayPrince
@BIG DICE
@BROWNCIGAR
@Soly

[ET the Refugee]

Ok my vote is 7 for Nick and 8 for Kilos. I feel like Nick had some nice punches and wordplay with decent setups and vocabulary but I also feel like Kilos had the same strengths but since he flipped the St. Nick line on Nicholas, and had better vocabulary and wordplay, his punches were harder and funnier. Good verse from both but kilos won.

[J8E]

EMCEE B: WINNER 5
EMCEE A : LOSER 3

Pretty clear winner here, basically 'MC B' was on another level, 'A' wasn't bad has some decent rhymes but nothing that packed a punch, also it was hard to read as there was no punctuation, I advise he tries using worldplay and also multis with more than one syllable also incorporate some metaphors in there, basically he is basic but will grow better with experience.

Winner : Nicely set out and everything flowed quite nicely, he had multi syllable rhymes and showed he understood these quite well, unlike the loser he also introduced wordplay once or twice, now this is good and although it's quite basic wordplay it was above his opponent and was great for this battle but it may need to be more complex for future battles, also try rhyming the middle of the rhymes more than the last part of a bar... I have to say both battlers didn't really use too much vocabulary and that could be implemented into their future battles.

[Soly]

EMCEE A: Low 7.
EMCEE B: Middle 6.
Nick has executed his punches and wordplay better. He was funnier too. Kilos mentioned the broken rhyme in a pretty nice way and he tried to keep it relevant but I feel like he forced some rhyme schemes and lines in his verse. For example "I hope lets beef don't think this QUEER-KAT-IS-SUPER". I think he just said that to rhyme with the following line. Not bad, but he could've used better punchlines. Nick kept punching and that's why he won for me.

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[X-Calibur]

Originally Posted by STaLWaRT

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Please read the first post and complete assignments week 1 and week 2 by Monday

All my votes are fairest of fair, even my given points match with the average rating on the battles.. still my vp is 0?

[X-Calibur]

Originally Posted by STaLWaRT

All my votes are fairest of fair, even my given points match with the average rating on the battles.. still my vp is 0?

You say register me I tell you what to do and now you complain ...
My here's no point dwelling on it man it is what it is so man up make a move and improve you can do that through here ....

So as I said read the first post then complete week's 1 & 2 and post it in here ....

Thanks,
X

- WEEK 1 -

EMCEE A: 3
EMCEE B: 5

EMCEE A: Focussed on his flow, No comma/fullstop.. It was hard to understand his lines, No wordplay, weak vocab, no metaphores, punchlines were weak and multis were absent. There was no real connection between his lines, he actually forced rhyming words in his verse just for the sake of it. Points for his flow and some jabs.
EMCEE B: Decent multis, metaz and vocab, few generic wordplays with some decent punchlines but overall he was consistent. Constantly attacked his opponent with punches and kept his multis clean and clear. So is my winner.