Triumph Of The Text Cypher Contest III

[Apollyon]

that right there is the reason im asking..

[Naturill™]

vote dropped

[X-Calibur]

So i see this shit thought i better drop by and give my two cents and do a real break down for you all

So first on the list
@Crysis
Rating - 6/10
comments ...
This felt like a diss/battle verse to me not quite what i was expecting it started of nice some nice concepts etc but then you went all battle edged its hard to flip from certain styles ....

@EtH
Rating - 7/10
Comments ...
First off too short for me .... Its started and ENEDED far to soon .... The imagery was on point but i think there was so much more you could of explored within this concept you gave yourself also felt it should have rhymed abit more

@Manhattan
Rating - 9/10
Comments ...
Now this was deep nice length tells a great story has a great flow and some great imagery nice entry favourite so far ....

@Explizzitt
Rating - 7/10
Comments ...
Hmmm interesting felt the concept liked the ending but nothing really got too deep or into it felt like some good flowing bars with some decent multies and metaphors with a hook of sorts .... Had foundations but no mansion on top ....

@Ayo Re-Up
Rating - 8/10
Comments ...
Like this attempt but lol at the irony talking bout his own crew now he in another one ... Felt some shit was on point and it flowed well and covered some of the crew information of the LB however missed out click clack and APOC from 06 period when MFDS was being created ... Liked it tho shit was orginal ....

@tana la déesse
Rating - 6/10
Comments ...
Read the title this had so much potential just wasnt long enough and you should of done like some split personality type shit a verse for each side of it .... What was there was coo just felt ya didn't deliver enough for me props

@albo95
Rating - 5/10
Comments ...
Concept was there delivery was to basic ... Vocabulary was below par flow was meh at times .... It sort of lost its cypher and began to sound like a letter of concern .... Not sure where and what the aim of this was ....

@MadVerbs
Rating - 7.5/10
Comments ...
Great topic something i can relate too but you only scratched the surface of what could of been said however what was said was still on point and i fucks wid it .... Dope ish just not enough of it for me ....

@KING POSEIDON
Rating - 6/10
Comments ...
Sloppy verse in terms of a rhyme scheme and multies conceptually nice and could of been dope ...

@R o w
Rating - 8/10
Comments ...
Concepts was cool but in terms of what it could of been and what id like to see from you its not there .... I want some deep ish out side of LB and its happenings give me a topical give me something challenging .... Lets be honest you could write this in ya sleep .... Still dope tho ....

Hope yall appreciate this and some feedback i know its short but i just spent the best part of over an hour reading this ish .....

My vote goes to manhattan just had more on the table ....

[Manhattan]

Solid breakdown @X-Calibur thanks

[Aggo]

I got a feeling people are voting on this without reading all the entries. Kinda takes away from the whole thing.

oh well , peeps lazy at these times.

Critical times hard to deal wit.

Thats whats up X-cal

[The Dogfather]

Pugz - when you got submission under some1's name have a hyper link so it goes straight to cypher - would be so easy then to check each cypher rather than search through 6 pages so far and not even half have submitted entries???

[X-Calibur]

Originally Posted by The Dogfather

Pugz - when you got submission under some1's name have a hyper link so it goes straight to cypher - would be so easy then to check each cypher rather than search through 6 pages so far and not even half have submitted entries???

They are hyperlinked smh .... Click on the submission text it takes you straight to it ....

was gon say

[The Dogfather]

lol my bad i clicked name and not actually submission - all good