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It's not even about ebonics though (for the most part) If you gonna use ebonics it has to atleast not be blatanty shoehorned in as replacement because you can't think of the correct rhyming word to fit the syllable count and concept. I.E
"I'm 25, you 15? that's a DISASTEROUS RECIPE! wrong punchline and them CATS IS ARRESTIN ME
Then it gets even worse and this isn't even a form of ebonics. it's just a straight up brain cramp.
"ATTRACTIVE, Uh, SEXUALLY!!/"
I new he was going to say SEXUALLY. The Uh is supposed to be suggestive of taking another angle. but because the angle is so obvious it doesn't work and it didnt even need to be there so sticks out as nothing else than what it was, a desperate attempt to even the syllable count.
And you know what. I din't need to LOOK for it. it's obvious right off the bat.
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It's not even about ebonics though (for the most part) If you gonna use ebonics it has to atleast not be blatanty shoehorned in as replacement because you can't think of the correct rhyming word to fit the syllable count and concept. I.E
"I'm 25, you 15? that's a DISASTEROUS RECIPE! wrong punchline and them CATS IS ARRESTIN ME
Then it gets even worse and this isn't even a form of ebonics. it's just a straight up brain cramp.
"ATTRACTIVE, Uh, SEXUALLY!!/"
I new he was going to say SEXUALLY. The Uh is supposed to be suggestive of taking another angle. but because the angle is so obvious it doesn't work and it didnt even need to be there so sticks out as nothing else than what it was, a desperate attempt to even the syllable count.
And you know what. I din't need to LOOK for it. it's obvious right off the bat.
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12-31-2014, 12:43 PM
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Lol... what it boils down to is there are many flaws in both of their verses.not all the ryming is perfect..and if a good voter was fucked to drop a 64 line breakdown then the slant/forced multis wouldve been brought up to light... as a compostion the particular style phro pulled off is nicely done scheme wise.. and being that he schemed the entire verse boosts the rating up a bit.. was it perfect?far from it... did it have its share of very played concepts ?definately... matrix punch immediatly comes to mind..is this battle better than anything curently out ..imo yes... btw. Racist endevour and playing to gether rhymes alot better than probable /godly feud.. as a multi.. and wouldve flowed better if godly feud wasnt the end of the multi and more towards the beginning... ex..
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reefer didnt even rhyme well
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12-31-2014, 01:45 PM
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reefer didnt even rhyme well
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12-31-2014, 01:56 PM
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How the fuck does cat rhyme with car in preschool?
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it doesnt thats the point
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12-31-2014, 02:45 PM
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The Pettis punch was really good.
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The Pettis punch was really good.
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12-31-2014, 03:29 PM
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Originally Posted by Indianapolis Jones
It's not even about ebonics though (for the most part) If you gonna use ebonics it has to atleast not be blatanty shoehorned in as replacement because you can't think of the correct rhyming word to fit the syllable count and concept. I.E
"I'm 25, you 15? that's a DISASTEROUS RECIPE! wrong punchline and them CATS IS ARRESTIN ME
Then it gets even worse and this isn't even a form of ebonics. it's just a straight up brain cramp.
"ATTRACTIVE, Uh, SEXUALLY!!/"
I new he was going to say SEXUALLY. The Uh is supposed to be suggestive of taking another angle. but because the angle is so obvious it doesn't work and it didnt even need to be there so sticks out as nothing else than what it was, a desperate attempt to even the syllable count.
And you know what. I din't need to LOOK for it. it's obvious right off the bat.
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No, it's CATS IS UH-RESTIN ME
ATTRACTIVE, UH, SEXUALLY! He takes the beginning of ''A-rrest'' and uses the Uh for that syllable. Looking to deep into it. He did put an extra syllable on the beginning though.
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12-31-2014, 04:29 PM
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That illimit bar for verity was dope imo..
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I think i talked to someone on IM about how weak that battle was.. Overrated like a bitch.
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12-31-2014, 05:05 PM
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I think i talked to someone on IM about how weak that battle was.. Overrated like a bitch.
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12-31-2014, 05:26 PM
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http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=tb&id=484055
Read these fucking comments and you'll see why EtH is saying what he's saying. Especially towards new people reading those comments thinking that is the epitome of battle rap and they should strive to write all their verse in a similar fashion.
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12-31-2014, 05:28 PM
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http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=tb&id=484055
Read these fucking comments and you'll see why EtH is saying what he's saying. Especially towards new people reading those comments thinking that is the epitome of battle rap and they should strive to write all their verse in a similar fashion.
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we been saying old heads suck @ Fidel Z @ Clippy Clip they acting like this is news
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