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ill say like this, stick to what you are and write how you feel, there always will be people sayin u need to do that or that, stay yourself, and stick to your style
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05-30-2012, 04:43 PM
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Y'all need to stop saying this shit.. "Needs to be more complex" lol That shit is so annoying.
Obviously nobody wants to read some shit that looks like it been copied from a Child's bed time story-book...
But Y'all expect some Magnificent Shakespeare shit that half the time don't even make sense.. I mean c'mon, half you dickheads prolly need a dictionary and a thesaurus for the most simple bars.
Thing is.. It wouldn't piss me off as much if y'all actually READ and took note of 'COMPLEX' bars.
Example of my own:
You could END UP DEAD IN PRISON because your BEST OF FRIENDS ARE SNITCHES; Coz ya 'Circle' aint 'Crazy' ... they just some 'CENTRE' 'MENTAL' BITCHES!!
'Circle' = Centre ... 'Crazy' = Mental ... Wordplay = Sentimental; Which means someone who is Soft, or takes things to heart sorta thing.
The only motherfuckin person that even mentioned this bar in their expo.. Was RULE.
I ain't sayin this is some 'Outta this world' shit.. But most of y'all can't even understand 'Simple Complexity' (lol)
Stop using the word Complexity unless your actually going to understand complex bars.
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*Facepalm*
This IS Childs Play And Definitely Forced
Like Who The Fuck Uses An "R" In Sentimental??
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you still have to give someone the benefit of the doubt regardless of how obvious it looks
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05-30-2012, 04:43 PM
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Originally Posted by SoupErb
Y'all need to stop saying this shit.. "Needs to be more complex" lol That shit is so annoying.
Obviously nobody wants to read some shit that looks like it been copied from a Child's bed time story-book...
But Y'all expect some Magnificent Shakespeare shit that half the time don't even make sense.. I mean c'mon, half you dickheads prolly need a dictionary and a thesaurus for the most simple bars.
Thing is.. It wouldn't piss me off as much if y'all actually READ and took note of 'COMPLEX' bars.
Example of my own:
You could END UP DEAD IN PRISON because your BEST OF FRIENDS ARE SNITCHES; Coz ya 'Circle' aint 'Crazy' ... they just some 'CENTRE' 'MENTAL' BITCHES!!
'Circle' = Centre ... 'Crazy' = Mental ... Wordplay = Sentimental; Which means someone who is Soft, or takes things to heart sorta thing.
The only motherfuckin person that even mentioned this bar in their expo.. Was RULE.
I ain't sayin this is some 'Outta this world' shit.. But most of y'all can't even understand 'Simple Complexity' (lol)
Stop using the word Complexity unless your actually going to understand complex bars.
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*Facepalm*
This IS Childs Play And Definitely Forced
Like Who The Fuck Uses An "R" In Sentimental??
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you still have to give someone the benefit of the doubt regardless of how obvious it looks
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05-30-2012, 04:59 PM
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Bruh how you live with ya self using a Kung Lao Hat play when that shit was old when Sega Genesis was fresh on the shelf? AND QUOTE IT?
It ain't me who needs to fall back homie.
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its an old quote lmao. you're a nobody, u wouldn't win a single battle on sites im revered on
shit is crayyy
enjoy WRITING IN CAPS
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Bruh how you live with ya self using a Kung Lao Hat play when that shit was old when Sega Genesis was fresh on the shelf? AND QUOTE IT?
It ain't me who needs to fall back homie.
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its an old quote lmao. you're a nobody, u wouldn't win a single battle on sites im revered on
shit is crayyy
enjoy WRITING IN CAPS
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05-30-2012, 05:09 PM
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lizman are you seriously trying to critique someone elses bars?
KILL YOURSELF
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05-30-2012, 05:16 PM
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A lot of bitching in here tbh.
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05-30-2012, 05:20 PM
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lizman are you seriously trying to critique someone elses bars?
KILL YOURSELF
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Kid Please
You Ain't Worth My Time
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05-30-2012, 05:50 PM
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damn so much bitchin, why would anyone even give a fudge what others have to bitch about
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damn so much bitchin, why would anyone even give a fudge what others have to bitch about
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05-30-2012, 06:47 PM
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Kid Please
You Ain't Worth My Time
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you still salty about me shitting on you in that tourney battle aren't you buddy 
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05-30-2012, 07:06 PM
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you still salty about me shitting on you in that tourney battle aren't you buddy |
Dude Your Verse Was Absolute Garbage And You Didn't Deserve The Win
I Actually Can Come Harder Off The Top [No Homo Nigga][Can Prove It]
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05-30-2012, 08:25 PM
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I think that was a pretty cool bar... there are boundaries for me with wordplay and when you go too far that it becomes forced... but for the 'sentimental' bar I think it worked fine.
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