LABattlegroundz Presentz: Fiji Osa vs Don Trill [1st Live Battle]

Thanks on the feed ima respond to each one I'm looking at it again I look like a jumping bean lmao .. But I need everyone to go drop a comment on the YouTube and get them views up 26 in 8hrs I can do better than that help me out fam and damn ain't no1 say anything bout the shout out

[Phil Banks]

ima watch this in a bit

Lol don't Laff

[Black Book]

Like Just C said, you're only problem was it was hard to understand you at times. I don't know if it's the camera or what, but you just need to pronounce your words clearer I guess. Besides that you did your thing for sure. Good shit Fiji!

[Mind Fuck]

just watched it

fiji, you definatly took the w but i felt some of your bars went riight over the crowds heads impacting your velocity on lines.. but all 3 verses were solid from you

don slippin in the begining didn't help em, but he only had a few stand out lines IMO in comparison toyour bars.

keep doing your thing kid/

GONZO

[Streetz De Hood]

Well.. dude u battled was ass n choked...not a good combo n def harder to measure ya performance that way bc u aint really face the typical factors u would in a solid even matched battle feel me? never was any pressure on u so of course u was gon get da W.. BUT with that said u did ya job did ya thing shouted LB cant hate ya for that... i mean ya flaws pretty much been stated in da other comments so i cant gon repeat it.. just work on that there n u'll be str8... but i was dead at how dude choked from da jump.. that nigga aint want it lol.. big ups my nigga

[Erupt]

Yeah everyone pretty much summed it up, performance was dope, had the crowd, but you pronounce your words with this slur that makes it hard to hear.... Come with some more concrete wordplay... with more solid delivery... maybe write your ish to a beat? other than that good shit yo.. deff had some bars in there that i fucked with... LBNATION

[2FUEL]

@Fiji Osa. Great stuff my dude. fair play. Keep at it.

[Phil Banks]

Yo, I think shit was dope for a first outting... but the same knock i've had on you for awhile i still got some of the bars are hard to make connect... like that citadel line... didnt get it... if i dont get lol no to many ppl will but also

the jon b an cam newton lines (i only got half thru your 2nd) those were the type of lines u need to focus on... add more of those jabs cause they got reactions from the crowd an were both dope... like the virgina slim line the concept was dope but you just overworded an multi'd it... dumb it down somewhat an when u doin those rapid multies slow it down like half notch an look at the camera...

funny > smart

but u only gonna get better an see what you need to sharpen goodluck bruh

good battle

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Yo, I think shit was dope for a first outting... but the same knock i've had on you for awhile i still got some of the bars are hard to make connect... like that citadel line... didnt get it... if i dont get lol no to many ppl will but also

the jon b an cam newton lines (i only got half thru your 2nd) those were the type of lines u need to focus on... add more of those jabs cause they got reactions from the crowd an were both dope... like the virgina slim line the concept was dope but you just overworded an multi'd it... dumb it down somewhat an when u doin those rapid multies slow it down like half notch an look at the camera...

funny > smart

but u only gonna get better an see what you need to sharpen goodluck bruh

good battle

[IV]

Ima watch this and PM you some feed.

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Don Trill is beautiful. Hasn't even started yet but he's already got the advantage.