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Them wack lines dont make sense, at all, to anybody.
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06-07-2011, 12:42 PM
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Oh wow.....a misspelling..... you know what....that makes your entire argument valid. How is that hypocritical? Typo's are typo's Lizzy McGuire.......your whole style is a double negative.
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So If You Say It Its A Typo But If I Say It It Was Supposed To Be Like That? Look At The Comment I Made; I Corrected It Before You Even Realized It And Commented On It, BECAUSE It Was A Typo. Hypocrite.
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Wait, how old are you? I feel uncomfortable being inside your head if you're a minor.
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you still have to give someone the benefit of the doubt regardless of how obvious it looks
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06-07-2011, 12:42 PM
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Oh wow.....a misspelling..... you know what....that makes your entire argument valid. How is that hypocritical? Typo's are typo's Lizzy McGuire.......your whole style is a double negative.
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So If You Say It Its A Typo But If I Say It It Was Supposed To Be Like That? Look At The Comment I Made; I Corrected It Before You Even Realized It And Commented On It, BECAUSE It Was A Typo. Hypocrite.
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you still have to give someone the benefit of the doubt regardless of how obvious it looks
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06-07-2011, 12:44 PM
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And double negatives = a positive... and that's about the only positive to anything you've ever said Liz congratulations...
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Easy.
Or You Will Claim That That Mindfuck Doesn't Make Any Sense
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06-07-2011, 12:48 PM
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Easy.
Or You Will Claim That That Mindfuck Doesn't Make Any Sense
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Everything that comes out of your mouth is a mindfuck.........
Really doe you shouldn't swalllow so much cum
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06-07-2011, 12:48 PM
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Easy.
Or You Will Claim That That Mindfuck Doesn't Make Any Sense
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Everything that comes out of your mouth is a mindfuck.........
Really doe you shouldn't swalllow so much cum
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06-07-2011, 12:49 PM
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Unworthy Of My Direct Reply
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06-07-2011, 12:51 PM
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Nothing new there then your heiness...
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06-07-2011, 12:51 PM
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06-07-2011, 01:49 PM
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1. You Falsified Our Converation, Making It Look Like You Asked The Question First And I Was Unable To Give You Any Explanation Which I Certainly Am
2. Since You Are Sending The Battle To Whoever Explains This, I Will Explain It (As You Just Ducked Out Of My Challenge In The Other Thread) Not Necessarily For Your Unworthy Ass But For The Knowledge That I Just Explained Something To One Of The Dumbest People Out There (Making It Impossible For Anybody Else To Not Understand)
"OUTSTANDING SPITS Which PUT YOU IN THE BOX, OUT, STAND IN PITS"
My Outstanding Raps Will Put You In The Coffin
The Bullets From My Gun That I Hold Aimed At You Will Put You In A Coffin
So Because Of That Go Out And Stand In A Pit
So Because Of That You Will Be In A Coffin Which Will Be In A Pit
"Your Girl Likes Me, Im A DEMANDING DICK So She NEEDS ME IN HER BOX so I can 'FEET'/FEED HER 'SOCKS' OFF for some OUTLANDISH 'STICK'"
Your Girl Likes Me I'm A Demanding Person
Your Girl Likes Me I'm A Penis That Needs Alot Of Loving
So She Needs To Put Me Into Her Vagina
She Needs To Give Me A Box/Punch
So I Can 'Rock Her Socks Off'/So I Can Passionately Make Love To Her
So I Can Absorb/Feed Her Sock[Sock Is Another Word For Punch]
So I Can Take The Socks Of My Feet And Have Sex With Her
All For Some Unconventional Sexual Intercourse
All For Some Unconventional Stick/Fight [Stick Also Means Fight]
"While Its Prison Sex Only Time You ROLL WITH THUGS"
The Only Time That You Roll [/Hang Around/Walk Around] Around With Thugs Is When You Roll Around While Having Sex In Priosn With Thugs
"I Hit This Pussy With The Steel Like A POLE IS FUCKED"
I Physically Hit This Pussy With The Steel Like A Steel Pole Is Fucked
I Hit This Cowardish Person/ Vagina With My Gun Like A Lapdancer Dances Erotically Around A Lapdancing Pole And Hits That Pole With Her Vagina
"Only Time His RAPS TIGHT/WRAPS TIED Is When This FOE IN CUFFS"
Only Time This Persons Speech Is Tightened Is When He Is Being Taken Away By The Police [Otherwise He Seems T Talk All Day Long]
Only Time His Rhyming Lyrics Are Good/Wraps Tied Is When This Opponent Is In Shackles [Wraps Can Mean Anything; This Time Wraps Stands For Cuffs As They Wrap Around The Persons Hands And Are Tied Together]
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Prime example of why I made my other thread, if your bars need this much explanation in order for it to make any semblance of sense, it's not a good bar.
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06-07-2011, 01:49 PM
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Originally Posted by lizman
1. You Falsified Our Converation, Making It Look Like You Asked The Question First And I Was Unable To Give You Any Explanation Which I Certainly Am
2. Since You Are Sending The Battle To Whoever Explains This, I Will Explain It (As You Just Ducked Out Of My Challenge In The Other Thread) Not Necessarily For Your Unworthy Ass But For The Knowledge That I Just Explained Something To One Of The Dumbest People Out There (Making It Impossible For Anybody Else To Not Understand)
"OUTSTANDING SPITS Which PUT YOU IN THE BOX, OUT, STAND IN PITS"
My Outstanding Raps Will Put You In The Coffin
The Bullets From My Gun That I Hold Aimed At You Will Put You In A Coffin
So Because Of That Go Out And Stand In A Pit
So Because Of That You Will Be In A Coffin Which Will Be In A Pit
"Your Girl Likes Me, Im A DEMANDING DICK So She NEEDS ME IN HER BOX so I can 'FEET'/FEED HER 'SOCKS' OFF for some OUTLANDISH 'STICK'"
Your Girl Likes Me I'm A Demanding Person
Your Girl Likes Me I'm A Penis That Needs Alot Of Loving
So She Needs To Put Me Into Her Vagina
She Needs To Give Me A Box/Punch
So I Can 'Rock Her Socks Off'/So I Can Passionately Make Love To Her
So I Can Absorb/Feed Her Sock[Sock Is Another Word For Punch]
So I Can Take The Socks Of My Feet And Have Sex With Her
All For Some Unconventional Sexual Intercourse
All For Some Unconventional Stick/Fight [Stick Also Means Fight]
"While Its Prison Sex Only Time You ROLL WITH THUGS"
The Only Time That You Roll [/Hang Around/Walk Around] Around With Thugs Is When You Roll Around While Having Sex In Priosn With Thugs
"I Hit This Pussy With The Steel Like A POLE IS FUCKED"
I Physically Hit This Pussy With The Steel Like A Steel Pole Is Fucked
I Hit This Cowardish Person/ Vagina With My Gun Like A Lapdancer Dances Erotically Around A Lapdancing Pole And Hits That Pole With Her Vagina
"Only Time His RAPS TIGHT/WRAPS TIED Is When This FOE IN CUFFS"
Only Time This Persons Speech Is Tightened Is When He Is Being Taken Away By The Police [Otherwise He Seems T Talk All Day Long]
Only Time His Rhyming Lyrics Are Good/Wraps Tied Is When This Opponent Is In Shackles [Wraps Can Mean Anything; This Time Wraps Stands For Cuffs As They Wrap Around The Persons Hands And Are Tied Together]
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Prime example of why I made my other thread, if your bars need this much explanation in order for it to make any semblance of sense, it's not a good bar.
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06-07-2011, 02:23 PM
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Prime example of why I made my other thread, if your bars need this much explanation in order for it to make any semblance of sense, it's not a good bar.
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I Never Said It Was A Good Bar
Btw, Who The Fudge Are You??
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06-07-2011, 02:27 PM
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Partly Funny
Although I'm (Supposedly) German So Should Do The Gassing
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Possibly the first thing you've said that makes 100% sense...
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I should be on the TOP 25 you idiots...what are u guys smoking and drinking...WTF...I got descent rhymes...the only thing i've gotten is a hate vote...and i'm still on Basic...it's what makes me the greatest bros.
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Partly Funny
Although I'm (Supposedly) German So Should Do The Gassing
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Possibly the first thing you've said that makes 100% sense...
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I should be on the TOP 25 you idiots...what are u guys smoking and drinking...WTF...I got descent rhymes...the only thing i've gotten is a hate vote...and i'm still on Basic...it's what makes me the greatest bros.
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Looks like we are all in agreement that them lines don't make sense. Is your ego still holing you back from reality Lizman?.
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06-08-2011, 04:24 PM
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Looks like we are all in agreement that them lines don't make sense. Is your ego still holing you back from reality Lizman?.
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Lemme show you some examples of how a complex bar should be written ....these are a chosen few from various people ... i wont name who wrote what... but they're all fresh with a clever punch with every aspect connecting properly both ways
That fake American accent? .... it's CRAZY N' LAME so stop "Lyin' On Tracks" unless ya "WAITIN FA TRAINS" to roll "STRAIGHT THROUGH YA BRAIN" untill the SIDES GO SPLAT if you "Train Ya Head" you get ya "MIND ON TRACK"
I'll leave you "Shook" and "TOSSED IN THE AIR" i'm too COCKY TO CARE, see you "Remind Me Of Dice" cuz i've "Seen How You Roll" ya always "SPOTTED WITH SQUARES"
This kid aint got nothing but weak punches & multi's i GO WITH THE FACTS I'M SERIOUS, the way "Bitches" "Soak Up" this "Pussy's Flow" is an (Oaverie Action) "OVER REACTION" ..."PERIOD!" (0_0)
I'm sorry e'rybody..I know it's my fault.. This WEAK GUY SUCKS but now he has a title cuz i KEYSTYLED DRUNK after i "Smoked Reefer & Passed Remark" with FINESSE & INTELLIGENCE while he "Blew Out The Same Old Ohs" and never said ANYTHING RELEVANT/ I call it the the "Sir Sean CONNERY CYCLE" cuz for this "English Character" to have any kinda "BOND W/ A TITLE" you really need a "SCOTSMAN TO GUIDE YOU"
I think-it's-great he loves "Prison-Break" the show carries the SAME CLOUT AS HIM he'll need to "TAKE OUT THE LINK" to "ESCAPE" NOW N WIN cuz his "Bars End Up Forced" whenever he "BREAKS OUT THE PEN"
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Let me exPLAIN N DROP SOME KNOWLEDGE..Since uA's AN ALCOHOLIC!! you can SAY HE's PROPER SCOTTISH cuz he WAKES UP IN THE MORNINGS craving TASTES OF VODKA TONICS in his DAILY POT OF PORRIDGE laced with, BAILYS .... CHOCOLATE ORANGE? *shrugs*
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Lemme show you some examples of how a complex bar should be written ....these are a chosen few from various people ... i wont name who wrote what... but they're all fresh with a clever punch with every aspect connecting properly both ways
That fake American accent? .... it's CRAZY N' LAME so stop "Lyin' On Tracks" unless ya "WAITIN FA TRAINS" to roll "STRAIGHT THROUGH YA BRAIN" untill the SIDES GO SPLAT if you "Train Ya Head" you get ya "MIND ON TRACK"
I'll leave you "Shook" and "TOSSED IN THE AIR" i'm too COCKY TO CARE, see you "Remind Me Of Dice" cuz i've "Seen How You Roll" ya always "SPOTTED WITH SQUARES"
This kid aint got nothing but weak punches & multi's i GO WITH THE FACTS I'M SERIOUS, the way "Bitches" "Soak Up" this "Pussy's Flow" is an (Oaverie Action) "OVER REACTION" ..."PERIOD!" (0_0)
I'm sorry e'rybody..I know it's my fault.. This WEAK GUY SUCKS but now he has a title cuz i KEYSTYLED DRUNK after i "Smoked Reefer & Passed Remark" with FINESSE & INTELLIGENCE while he "Blew Out The Same Old Ohs" and never said ANYTHING RELEVANT/ I call it the the "Sir Sean CONNERY CYCLE" cuz for this "English Character" to have any kinda "BOND W/ A TITLE" you really need a "SCOTSMAN TO GUIDE YOU"
I think-it's-great he loves "Prison-Break" the show carries the SAME CLOUT AS HIM he'll need to "TAKE OUT THE LINK" to "ESCAPE" NOW N WIN cuz his "Bars End Up Forced" whenever he "BREAKS OUT THE PEN"
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Let me exPLAIN N DROP SOME KNOWLEDGE..Since uA's AN ALCOHOLIC!! you can SAY HE's PROPER SCOTTISH cuz he WAKES UP IN THE MORNINGS craving TASTES OF VODKA TONICS in his DAILY POT OF PORRIDGE laced with, BAILYS .... CHOCOLATE ORANGE? *shrugs*
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