ViTRiOL = Fair Voters Club? LMAO!

[ViTRiOL]

Originally Posted by Skizzo

The problem is you're missing commas Vit. Grammatically speaking..

"Our entire team is made up of Wheel, Brake and Tire Crews."

^ That is a correctly formed sentence. No matter which way you look at it. Now... I don't want to be on some white knight shit, but you're wrong pimp. Sorry.


Other than that though.. It's your opinion, I can't say whether it's hot or not, THAT is opinion but when it's a question of correct sentence grammar or not, well... we can measure that right? that's actual FACT. So yeah, you're wrong there. lol

Anyways... Been a while huh PulSe. You still being a bitch, as always I see lol. What's new around here though?

Jesus Christ, can't anyone understand this utterly simple concept?

Because we'll break entire crews. It works as a sentence.

Because wheel break n' tire crews. NO. It doesn't make sense.

Refer to my tutorial, maybe pULSe'll learn something from it.

[Godbody]

Originally Posted by ViTRiOL

Why do I have to? If it's an imperfect bar then I obviously would have taken a different approach to constructing it.

Because wheel brake n' tire crews/because we'll break entire crews isn't a perfect wordplay, it works one way.

How about:

Y'all know about us? Doom straight down to "break entire crews" w/o a NEED TO FIX THE WHIP

That's better at least.

Doom straight down to break n' crews/Doom straight down to break entire crews.

It's just about thinking both ways.

That makes absolutely 0 sense

So you can brake & tire crews without the need to fix the whip? How does that work again ViTRiOL?

You could brake and tire a CAR
You can't brake and tire a CREW without the need to fix a whip

This is some of the best comedic relief on here in a while

[Mani Mula]

In hip hop everything aint grammatically correct

Slang aint Proper English Rappers never Had Proper English

Wheel/ We'll Break/Brake N Tire(Entire) Crews

In ebonics "And" is Commonly replaced by "N" and saying N Tire sounds just like Entire

Let the Bar Slide Its Much Better then the Sloppy wordplay displayed here

[Babylon]

Originally Posted by Skizzo

The problem is you're missing commas Vit. Grammatically speaking..

"Our entire team is made up of Wheel, Brake and Tire Crews."

^ That is a correctly formed sentence. No matter which way you look at it. Now... I don't want to be on some white knight shit, but you're wrong pimp. Sorry.


Other than that though.. It's your opinion, I can't say whether it's hot or not, THAT is opinion but when it's a question of correct sentence grammar or not, well... we can measure that right? that's actual FACT. So yeah, you're wrong there. lol

Anyways... Been a while huh PulSe. You still being a bitch, as always I see lol. What's new around here though?

Not that I'm in this, but I'd like to input my opinion:

Wordplay works with multiple meanings, not just one.

While "Our entire team is made up of Wheel, brake and Tire crews" does work (Even though it is completely irrelevant to fuck all, and just looks fucking retarded. I mean, who the fuck says "Yeaaa shun ma squad fulla mechanics"?

It's double meaning doesn't work in the slightest:

"Our entire team is made up of we'll break entire crews"

That doesn't work at all. Not to mention "and tire" and "entire" also is broken as fuck. The bar is hella ill-structured in multiple ways.

[ViTRiOL]

Originally Posted by Godbody

ViTRiOL has to be a 300 pound virgin ..this nigga macked his hand and they've been in a steady relationship since he hit puberty lol

Here's a ViTRiOL bar

I'm in the "Running to Catch a Body", I got the FINESSE TO BREAK HIS REGIMEN so watch me put an "End to this Streak" like the ARREST OF NAKED REVELLERS!


REGIMEN rhymes with REVELLERS?

Yo ViTRiOL you trippin me out with every post...What planet you on when you decide to let nonsense escape your fingers?

Skizzo, Mani, Dave, Man..several other vets

How many more niggas need to chime in before you realize how stupid you look?

Yeah, I'll admit that was a forced rhyme. True say.

Maturity Battle:

ViTRiOL 1 - Pulse 0

---------- Post added at 06:37 PM ---------- Previous post was at 06:36 PM ----------

Originally Posted by Godbody

That makes absolutely 0 sense

So you can brake & tire crews without the need to fix the whip? How does that work again ViTRiOL?

You could brake and tire a CAR
You can't brake and tire a CREW without the need to fix a whip

This is some of the best comedic relief on here in a while

It works both ways and it was an example. I managed to make sevenfold more sense that you using five seconds of brain activity.

[Godbody]

Crysis still doesn't understand that the 'n' in "Wheel-break-n-tire-crews" is like saying AND

n = &

Like Shake 'n Bake

People call it Shake AND Bake all the time

But if you read the box the brandname is 'Shake 'n Bake' ...with the understanding that the consumer realizes contraction letter n ('n) is slang for AND

& @ViTRiOL

Y'all know about us? Doom straight down to "break entire crews" w/o a NEED TO FIX THE WHIP

^ Still doesn't make sense

How do you break & tire a crew without the need to fix the whip? Or how do you break entire crews without the need to fix a whip? LOL


You're reaching & those concepts are so unrelated it'd be the equivalent of me saying

You'll get 'popped' like bubble gum on the 4th of July!

what the fuck does gum have to do with the 4th of July? lmfao

let daddy teach you about wordplay

I've won more battles than you've probably done TOTAL by using it

we can argue all day about how to make it a perfect wordplay the fact of the matter is your version is a watered down, much shittier example, that is incorrect because it only makes sense with 1 meaning

mine makes sense 3 different ways but because I forgot the word "we" its grammatically incorrect

yeaa..you bit the bullet on this one son. Step ya wordplay up

[ViTRiOL]

Ya’ll aint real-fake’s inside-of-you. .& fuck ya ‘trans mission’ cuz “Wheel brake-n-tire-crews” like novice me-CHANICS IN TEAMS.

@Godbody - how can you break entire crews like novice mechanics in teams?

It doesn't matter because it's a conceptual flip. Now you're just abandoning text battling criteria completely with that hypocrisy. I was right to vote against you, you're embarrassing your tag mate, your crew and Letsbeef.

Keep talking yo.

[Skizzo]

Well, to each his own opinion Vit. I respectfully disagree, but then again.. that's your vote and your opinion pimpin.



And PulSe admits that IM a vet? Wow... Who saw that shit coming? LOL.

[ViTRiOL]

Several people have already agreed with me. Dean says I should do a wordplay thread for this chump, I pretty much have and he's so egotistically blinded by denial that it's pointless.

Just send you fucking punk.

---------- Post added at 06:45 PM ---------- Previous post was at 06:44 PM ----------

Originally Posted by Skizzo

Well, to each his own opinion Vit. I respectfully disagree, but then again.. that's your vote and your opinion pimpin.



And PulSe admits that IM a vet? Wow... Who saw that shit coming? LOL.

It's not opinion-based. It has to work both ways as a sentence.

Are you telling me that "Because wheel break n' tire crews" works as a natural sentence. I'm not beefing. Thanks for reading my view.

Originally Posted by Mani Mula

In hip hop everything aint grammatically correct

Slang aint Proper English Rappers never Had Proper English

Wheel/ We'll Break/Brake N Tire(Entire) Crews

In ebonics "And" is Commonly replaced by "N" and saying N Tire sounds just like Entire

Let the Bar Slide Its Much Better then the Sloppy wordplay displayed here

The n-tire/entire isn't the problem, that's fine. The problem is the wordplay has to make sense both ways in the sentence.