Cringeworthy shit I've seen here recently

[Shodan]

Not even gonna lie, some of the shit I see on here is just horrible. Let me point out of the worst offenses here

He 's green w/ envy, that's the "COLOR OF MONEY Come w/ "All the Right Moves" when I'm TOUCHIN' HIS HUNNY,"Endless Love" how she "Taps" "Knight and day" till i BUST IN HA' TUMMY, - Celsius

bust in her tummy? Really? Are you fucking five? It sounds like something kindergartners would say while having sex. And you're a fucking pedophile for thinking about that

nice title, guess you've been SORTA TEXTIN WELL but facin Row-now-will-make you 'go-down-in-flames" like ORAL SEX IN HELL! - Row

Yes, Row, your signature style is based off of contrived concepts, but this is just next level

KEYS IN IGNITION'S PRIMED for TEAMS IN THE INDY 5!!/nigga PLEASE, YA GIMMICS AINT TITE, thats why my comments 'hit so close to home',it gave ken griFFEY THE DISTANCE TO SLIDE - ILLoKWENT

You're a many-time LBT champion, and still don't understand scheming? Let me explain something to you. It's called inflection. Just because the syllables are the same doesn't mean that it's a fluent rhyme.

Fuck all of you, none of you are on my level in any way

u suck dick

[Shodan]

Originally Posted by Indica

u suck dick

What can I say, I like the salty taste

I laughed at Row's line for all the wrong reasons. I like it but it's horrendous. ILLoKWENT's flow was pretty terrible in that line (I obviously don't get what I reckon is a US sports reference). Words like "aint" are way too strong to just throw in like "the" "a" "it" etc.

Is Cel's reference that someone with the second name Knight sang Endless Love? Nothing about that line does anything.

[Celsius]

Originally Posted by The EtHer

I laughed at Row's line for all the wrong reasons. I like it but it's horrendous. ILLoKWENT's flow was pretty terrible in that line (I obviously don't get what I reckon is a US sports reference). Words like "aint" are way too strong to just throw in like "the" "a" "it" etc.

Is Cel's reference that someone with the second name Knight sang Endless Love? Nothing about that line does anything.

Everything in quotations is a Tom Cruise movie (the theme for my concept battle)

Originally Posted by Celsius

Everything in quotations is a Tom Cruise movie (the theme for my concept battle)

Ah, didn't get that. Ironic that Beverley Knight did that Endless Love cover with Lionel then eh? haha

Although for the record, why the fuck are you wasting all your moves in one line? haha

Originally Posted by Row

1. "I'm just fed up to HELL WITH YA DUMB SHIT; I'm talking "bend-ja-men" without MENTIONING BUTTON!"

2. "Who says Afterthought is ACTUALLY KNOWN?, HONESTLY, if you hear "A-T(ee) is extra-large"? that's FAT PEOPLE'S CLOTHES SHOPPING SPREES!"

3. " I HURT & MUG LAME NERDS, i'll prolly "bask in robbin" AT NO 31 FLAVORS!"

4. the characters in Shodan's name.

foh




& Of course the OP would quote people he hasn't, and will never beat

Originally Posted by Row

1. "I'm just fed up to HELL WITH YA DUMB SHIT; I'm talking "bend-ja-men" without MENTIONING BUTTON!"

2. "Who says Afterthought is ACTUALLY KNOWN?, HONESTLY, if you hear "A-T(ee) is extra-large"? that's FAT PEOPLE'S CLOTHES SHOPPING SPREES!"

3. " I HURT & MUG LAME NERDS, i'll prolly "bask in robbin" AT NO 31 FLAVORS!"

4. the characters in Shodan's name.

foh

1. Line doesn't really work. Maybe "Bend ya men" would have worked to say he fucks his crew or something. "Without mentioning Button" means nothing.

2. I have a feeling I spit a shit like like that against AT in a throwaway verse years ago. Multi is too long imo. "OF OBESE" "SHOPPING SPREES"...you had plenty of options to deliver that multi with much better scheme.

3. Rhyme is terrible. Bask N Robbins is an ice cream spot ala US right? Anyways, punch delivery was terrible. Wordplay is a bit shit but could have a decent punch off it. Mug and One don't rhyme at all. AT NO shouldn't be capped either.

4. Yeah. If you need to alt character or copy and paste to log in, fuck outta here.

[ILLoKWENT]

Originally Posted by ṠȟȍƋăⓝ

Not even gonna lie, some of the shit I see on here is just horrible. Let me point out of the worst offenses here

He 's green w/ envy, that's the "COLOR OF MONEY Come w/ "All the Right Moves" when I'm TOUCHIN' HIS HUNNY,"Endless Love" how she "Taps" "Knight and day" till i BUST IN HA' TUMMY, - Celsius

bust in her tummy? Really? Are you fucking five? It sounds like something kindergartners would say while having sex. And you're a fucking pedophile for thinking about that

nice title, guess you've been SORTA TEXTIN WELL but facin Row-now-will-make you 'go-down-in-flames" like ORAL SEX IN HELL! - Row

Yes, Row, your signature style is based off of contrived concepts, but this is just next level

KEYS IN IGNITION'S PRIMED for TEAMS IN THE INDY 5!!/nigga PLEASE, YA GIMMICS AINT TITE, thats why my comments 'hit so close to home',it gave ken griFFEY THE DISTANCE TO SLIDE - ILLoKWENT

You're a many-time LBT champion, and still don't understand scheming? Let me explain something to you. It's called inflection. Just because the syllables are the same doesn't mean that it's a fluent rhyme.

Fuck all of you, none of you are on my level in any way

says the person that does it even worse on his own battles.. lol.. and you have no clue what inflection is.. a person hears the stressed sound from the beginning of the ryme and the end of the ryme.. also the timing of the compound words.. thats why its better to ryme compound words like taffy with daffy, instead of bad knee or hats clean... but carry on ...your still a faggit in my book.

[J u s T C]

10 years in and the same old shit concepts and wording run amok.