TOPICAL TOURNAMENT RD 2: Beyond Lunatic (Winner) vs Catharsis (No Show)

[Ill Phenom]

TOPICAL TOURNAMENT 2011 ROUND 2

Beyond Lunatic Vs Catharsis

House Rules Apply. Any questions, contact me.

CHECK INS ARE DUE WEDNESDAY (09-28-11) AT 11:59PM EST. VERSES ARE DUE SATURDAY (10-01-11) AT 11:59PM. EST. NO EXCEPTIONS.

Line Length: 20-40 lines.



Voting Rubix
Rhyming Scheme/Flow
Vocabulary
Topic/Meaning
Storytelling/Progression
Emotion
Imagery
Poetic Techniques
Ending

GOOD LUCK

[Beyond Lunatic]

CHECK!!!CHECK!!lol..im about to drop in awhile!!

[Beyond Lunatic]

''You Aint Shit Unless Support On Your Ass''

Assistance Is Like A Spinal;Gripin You Back/
Either You Exhaustin Herbal Or Snifin A Crack/
Cooperation Is Profound Passion From Addiction To Sexual Emotion/
Even Silence Contributes W/ Sound To Output An External Vibration/
Acknowledgement Is An Adversary If You Aint Loyal To Reality/
Get Lost W/ Deepness;Everything Requires Support Even Gravity/
From My Home Recordin Studio To The Technology Soiled For Industry/
Father To Care His Baby And Mother To Enhance Love,Naturally
And ^^^Above^^^ Bolster Is Only Felt Internally Plus Only If Logically
You Fantazie Every Human Being Is Part Of Your Family/
Your Mind Is Someone And Will Be Anyone;It's Too Strange/
So Heart Is The Only Dictionary With A True Meaning Of Friend/
''FRIEND'' Is The Real Synonyms For Help/
Wealth Will Stand Only If Your Pillar Is Health/
There Is Somethin' To Fortify;NoOne Can Do It Self/
Remember You Losin Errything W/O Support;Now Tighten Your Belt/
Rasta Wont Have Bob-Marely If The Lighter Wasnt Kept/
Ground Must Be All Wet Off Semen If There Was No Bed/
Nahmean???Back-Up Is Like Breath;Everywhere You'll Go;Anywhere It'll Blow/
As You Know;We Just Cant Get Rid Off ''AID/AID(s)''....It's Once And For All/

[Ill Phenom]

Beyond. Post this verse and picture in the writers block, if you want feedback on it.

[Beyond Lunatic]

posted bro and would be thankful if you give your time to drop some feedback too...

[Catharsis]

I never even knew about this..... how the fuck did I get signed up for it?

[IV]

haha i didn't count this battle as your loss.. You had another battle that you did lose which is where your loss came from @Catharsis