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For something to be a multi it can't have like 6 words in between rhymes

At that point the rhymes are fragmented which is very easy to do

The way you ALL UP IN THE ACTION JUS AIN'T AS SMART
If you WANNA GIT A CAST DEN JUS PLAY A PART

That's a multi, not

I keep CLIPS in the FIFTH cuz it SPIT on a DAILY BASIS
You'll get FLIPPED off a BRIDGE if you TRIP makin CRAZY STATEMENTS
I just said that in my first post though. You're confusing SYLLABLES with RHYMES. I never said it was 15 syllable scheme where every word matches. In fact I referenced my Hell on Earth shit as doing a better job than Kendrick's verse at making everything rhyme

It's the fact that its 14-15 syllables and he carried on the SCHEME for so long. It's still a 14-15 syllable scheme. I never said its a multi-syllabic masterpiece where every word rhymes with every word in the bar before

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Originally Posted by Bleu View Post
For something to be a multi it can't have like 6 words in between rhymes

At that point the rhymes are fragmented which is very easy to do

The way you ALL UP IN THE ACTION JUS AIN'T AS SMART
If you WANNA GIT A CAST DEN JUS PLAY A PART

That's a multi, not

I keep CLIPS in the FIFTH cuz it SPIT on a DAILY BASIS
You'll get FLIPPED off a BRIDGE if you TRIP makin CRAZY STATEMENTS
I just said that in my first post though. You're confusing SYLLABLES with RHYMES. I never said it was 15 syllable scheme where every word matches. In fact I referenced my Hell on Earth shit as doing a better job than Kendrick's verse at making everything rhyme

It's the fact that its 14-15 syllables and he carried on the SCHEME for so long. It's still a 14-15 syllable scheme. I never said its a multi-syllabic masterpiece where every word rhymes with every word in the bar before

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