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Originally Posted by Esso
I aint read much of anything anyone has said...but since ya made it a public issue and I got a minute to burn, Ill throw my two cents in. Whether or not you care is up to you but I dont even know you so this is about as objective as it gets.
Slant is necessary....I do as much as anyone but LARGEST and DOLLAR don't really work. I see where the rhymes were in the first line though everyone is so used to reading all caps it seems some dont know how to go without it at times. The Macc and Cheese bit was a decent concept but the play was off. If he smiles, Macs cheesin...not Mac n Cheesin. Macc's battled about a million times....the Mac/Apple/computer concepts are about as obvious as they come. Dont be surprised that no one is impressed with that. The PC wordplay was weak and forced and the fact he went from being a Mac to PCing himself together back to a Mac that became an actual apple in the span of a line and a half...nah, homie...that's redundant and disconnected at the same time, and thats tough to manage. Ya got good ideas and rhymed mostly well but it just wasnt getting tied together. Take that how ya want to.
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Perfect two cents, actually.
I wasn't actually aware his name use to be MaCc at some point. I came back to 1 Finga. I could definitely see how they're played concepts no doubt, didn't know they would've already been referenced toward him. I honestly just put in the "just enough" effort and tried to deliver them in a not-so played way while still sticking to the Nameplay Battle concept we had going into it. I was trying to come at his name in every aspect of the verse, I ran out of quality ideas but thought it'd due.
The PCing bit, like I said, is forced but blah blah. It's suppose to have a contradicting context. Having "MaCc PCing himself together" wouldn't make a contradictory product, which I was trying to emulate into the "pretend hes a God" bit bc him calling himself a God is contradictory to the fact that he's just a basic human being. I know pretty elaborate right?
All in all, I am taking the feedback seriously.
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Originally Posted by Rain Matrix 1
I wrote mine in 30 minutes from scratch
Ur going 2nd and taking days to write it
Unbelievable
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You talking shit about a dead site and then get on someones ass for taking a day or two to write shit for you.
People got lives and moods, not everyones gotta constantly be in a creative writing mood and set aside shit in their life to get at an internet rapper's 4 bars.
At least I had an existential problem with my creative process, that has life implications. You're whining about some kid ignoring you on that dead battling website. If he's taking so long, improve on your 30 minute dump while you wait or take your time instead of being so up-tight about due dates, I'm sure you got other shit beside sitting on LB in the meantime
