Fair critique: i can respect the fact your freestyling and coming from the heart but the essence of a song like this needs to be done to the t. flow was choppy, some of the lyrics weren't clear enough to understand. beat was very basic but enough to bring feeling out. sorry if it sounds harsh, but this lacked much of what it needed. Posted By: Miqueas - 2011-10-09
im a big fan of the spoken word scene yo....beat was sick as fuck too. good shit here. not much to critique for this.....gotta give dis an 8 for lyrical content yo....... Posted By: BFNE CEO™ - 2011-10-12