Sheist got the first half if the track and I took the 2nd half. love this track but need feedback. think I gotta raise my vocals so hears the lyrics
Trigger clutching, pistol busting chopper soundin like niggas drumming.
Split ya onion quick concussion hospital gown is fitting snuggie.
Liquor guzzling, bitch I'm fucking, whether or not u wit ya husband
Mister money never miss the money but i got yo bitch missing money
son bitches love me, like shopping and boppin and rockin some hot shit.
Shit getting ugly, so watch who u watching ya eye i will sock it
u dripping, bloody, like twats on the dot so stop tryna box kid
U sniffing runny, that's snot when u cry so stop bein snotty.
Hot like rari but vicious as panthers
This my kinda party, cause bitches is dancing
We wilding on Molly, twitching and panting
And I'm on a hard beat, so this is the anthem
For ditching a friend and picking up 10 dikes that'll bite when I'm fishing to fin
Ish getting iffy, feel the suspense its thicker than Nick.
meaning Nicki sick wit pen penicillin
Risky to tempt me this the end i went in again
Winning again? What's new Sha?
michellin man i do pop.
Smooth spy when i do crimes lose cops like tube socks
Do not try to boo sha kaboom yall like booya
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flow was real dope n the beat made the track very well-rounded..bars could be stepped up just a bit, but then again punchlines may not be your style so you cant be knocked for that..like i said though, dope shit fam Posted By: ADvOcAtE™ - 2013-01-05
the feel of the track was dope-beat was jumpin...first half did his thing.a lil stronger delivery woulda made his bars hit harder but dope-sha you always got a sick dellivery multi s was sharp and mixed to some nice wordplay...vocal s could be turned up to mach the first verse..just a bit...real feed back... Posted By: RELLE - 2013-01-05
This more of a performance type song, but I never try to slack on the bars, even tho I know there's bars I've used I put a mix to it. wrote this pretty quick, just wanted to hear myself on the beat lol so I just took off from his last line, good lookin on the input tho Posted By: $ha-Money - 2013-01-05
Yea I had feeling relle but was high when I was mad mixing and in the headphones it sounded righ lol.But when I hear it on speakers I think the same. So they y def getting turned up Posted By: $ha-Money - 2013-01-05
vocally u need to match up levels slightly but this a real nice dumb out banger,and im not takin a shot at the lyrics this shit is hard 2 write too! otherwise nice shit sha! Posted By: Boss-MC - 2013-01-06
Idk if it just me but it sounds like just the first half of my verse if Low then picks up. Idk y I did it in one take Posted By: $ha-Money - 2013-01-07
not bad my nig but kinda put some emphasis into ya verse but not bad Posted By: Tony The TYGER - 2013-01-09
Off I'n the west we call that style off beat flo is to slow for tempo sounds like your talkin beats real nice tho no hate homie send me some others I'll check them 100 Posted By: MeTa-FoRcEz - 2013-01-09
i'll have 2 peep it later this evening or tomorrow,but i'll for sure give u some real feedback,, Posted By: mister jon flako - 2013-01-09
Must've only heard the first verse cause I ain't rap slow Posted By: $ha-Money - 2013-01-09
You sound like Freddo Santana. No offense. Posted By: parasite - 2013-01-09
this is real,,not my mind of lifestyle but i respect it,,,dope beats,,lyrics were good ND THE FLOW AND tEMPO YA ALL BROUGHT ROCKED IT FOR SURE.. Posted By: mister jon flako - 2013-01-09
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