Erupt-Da-Monsta vs Double T (Round 1) Erupt-Da-Montsta wins
 

Erupt-Da-Monsta vs Double T

House rules apply. Any questions, contact me.

Check ins are due Monday (March 5th) at 11.59PM EST
Verses are due Friday (March 9th) at 11.59PM EST

Voting Rubix
Rhyming Scheme/Flow
Vocabulary
Topic/Meaning
Storytelling/Progression
Emotion
Imagery
Poetic Techniques
Ending

checkin in

@Master-Mind make sure you check in before tomorrow night!

Master-mind has forfeited, i will try and find a replacement.

Double T will take Master Minds place

Checking in

@Erupt-da-Monsta @Double T there will be an extension til 11.59PM on Sunday (EST) please drop your verses by then

In the event of a double no show the person who checked in first will go to the next round.

"Stans Spazz" Serial Dream Killer


Manifest destiny
Relentless pursuit of dreams keep me in shape aligned with them congruently
You and me
Lets relay facts
Reaching self actualization's like finding a needle in a hay stack
You complete me
There's no place to cower
Your face devours the walls of my basement coward
Meet your maker
You were released from days perched in the cage my mind created you
Fly free pretty dove
Until I shoot you down with the arrow cupid loves
The glare emitted from the mask I wear haunts you
I sought to conceal my emotions
Loves potion induced the curtains to raise
The truth set you free
The love invested seems to have run you dry
I wish you well to survive
Blood thirsty
Unworthy
Hung jury
Should you live or die who's to judge
Political thugs adjust the motivation that came from above
Ive grown weary from chasing you
Making food for thought from your every move
My final victim
The bible mentions of death more
than life
Life only exists in the beginning of time
Scream with the congregation
A goals genesis is exiled by a minds revelation
You and I can no longer coincide

The dream catcher must die

5 min key for the noshow

@Erupt-da-Monsta thank you for submitting! You win via no show, but hopefully the next round will be an all-show round. I will send you a break down on your verse later on so it's not completely wasted. Thank you and good luck