Aye fam, you've got a lot of potential my dude. I think you might be able to truly benefit from joining my group, the Elevation Temple. There you can participate in interactive practice exercises created to test your skills in each element of battle rap, get all of your verses broken down & rated to see what you can do better at, and generally better yourself with the company of other emcees wanting to do the same as you!
If you're at all interested in a concept like this, visit my profile then under the groups box, click "Elevation Temple" and then join from that page.