i saw ur battle with ill4. i need u to work a bit more with vocabulary, and rhyming two or more words with each other. I noticed u used JILL, HILL, BILLS. U got some good concepts, i see where ur going with it but to get votes u gotta rhyme multiple times within the bars. this is just an example, not throwing any punches or anything

THIS KIDDRIXX gotta LITTLE KIDS DICK, so take a INTERMISSION before a CLIP GETS SLIPPED// thru ya face and IT RIP down ya mouth like FISH STICKS do to kanye west, get a KILT FAH THIS BITCH//

most these ppl arent creative at all on here, they just have multi's, thats why. Dont take these ppl's votes for heart either, half of them dont read it, some just troll, and most are simple as fuck. Go under view text cyphers, look to the right side of the page and it'll say hottest solo drops, go on anyone by RULE, go on his page, and check his battles. dudes real creative, you'll pick up some shit from him.