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Thanks for the hate vote.
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Hey, I saw you gave me a vote v. BarzILLA, 1-10...
Logically, I did throw punches back at him, so I don't think I'm deservant of a 1? I mean, was my verse that far off that you couldn't at least give me a logical vote...perhaps a 6, maybe a 7? A 1-10 vote is utter BS. Learn to vote.
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You haven't even won a battle? Stay off my battles until you can actually win some fuckhead.
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Hey dude just seen your latest battle and thought i'd offer some advice you want to capitalise your rhymes eg DIE/FLY etc so the readers can find it easier to understand also you want to go a bit more complex like in your surf/snurf line you could have said something like " im RIDING THE SURF been VIOLENT SINCE BIRTH im gonna kill this little 'blue chump' so he'll DIE LIKE A SMURF!
Thats multisylable rhymes they aren't perfect but they are close enough (violent/riding)
Just a few tips. Shout me back if you want some more advice or send and 8 to see how I would battle you.
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