http://www.letsbeef.com/cypher_detai...on=tb&id=60925
peep this dope cypher if you got time and give feedback plzz.

http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=tb&id=450789 -VOTE FOR ME lol

I could feel that though, when you enunciate words differently they can work and it can be considered a ''slanted rhyme'' and make the multiple syllable rhyme scheme work just fine, so I can see where you're coming from. Probably not the best idea for text though lol. S'all good my guy.

BTW if you're bored check out a couple of my latest cyphers. I promise they're fire.

send 8..

*reads comments*

I'm not going to speak on all that because IDK the situation. I will say that I know this site won't make you rich or famous, but I do hope you take it serious. Because when you rap as hard as you can that's the only way you can get better, and reading other emcees material, studying their styles/ideas/concepts, (even if they're weaker than you) you can also learn that way, and you will then elevate as well...

ANYway, we just battled, and I SEE potential in you man.

Multie set you used: Stop-Sign, Got-Time, Cock-Guy, and randomly in there you SCREWED UP the multie scheme by saying ''fucked mind''.. the MIND rhymed, but ''fucked'' doesn't rhyme with stop-got-cock, therefore the multie scheme is screwed up completely.

Hope you understand what I mean and if you need more lessons , message me.

I think you'd be an excellent rookie and a great future asset to my crew if your attitude is right and you're willing to learn.

Holla @ me hommie.

I know you don't "give a shit" lol thats why you put no effort into your writing, and also why you dont read battles. But rest assured, we don't really give a shit about you either. Soon you'll start losing battles along with confidence in yourself, and we'll all be glad when you quit rapping.

wow, cyphering for 8 minutes huh? you must have some hot shit going. like i said, it's all gravy... and don't tell me to refrain from shit, i'm just telling you that you should pay more attention. By the way your rhymes are wack as fuck son. I'll just add you to the blocked list of morons.

you cant remember me? you voted on my battle 8 minutes ago lol... that just shows me how much attention youre paying to the battles. I'm sure youre just smashing thru battles tryna stack credits... its all gravy yo, but you should really try to read them more carefully

you serious with that vote? did you even read the battle?