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12-24-2011 02:33 AM
JiminiSpitit
Like , capitalize the rhymes
And I noticed your lines are long , like 14 words in one sentence , a long time to get to the RHYMIN word , try and cut em short,
If you want more insight , look at my battles , nit the best but it's an example of how to get victories ,
Nah mean?
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12-24-2011 12:21 AM
JiminiSpitit
Welcome ,
Try and stay active on the battle scene,
Give fair votes and study how the vets get their victories , they cap their rhymes , consistent with punches , and all that ,
Follow this guide and I can see you being a beast ,
Now,
Let's get emmmmmm
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12-23-2011 11:19 PM
Fiji Osa
Frm New Orleans .. An I'm Old (lol)
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Chuurrr Yee G More Nz Cats Are Up On This Shit Im Frm Hendo Brah