Bro, all I can say is you're really hateful. You been calling people wack, hating on their battles, when in all honesty they're very good and YOU'RE wack. And you'll blow off that I just said that because you're so ignorant and arrogant, which in return limits your potential for growth. You'll just remain wack forever....
You need to learn multiple syllable rhymes, punchlines, wordplay, and metaphors. You have none of the above. I'm here to be your teacher. You have potential, you have a voice, you have a certain attitude towards you that could be beneficial as far as a personality goes, but you need to learn how to rap, point blank. I'll help you. Holla if you want to learn.