Welcome to the genesis of our newest thread series: The Critics Pen. At first, this will be a very regular thread series written by me alone, where I take your most recent few verses and break them down, then break your entire style down according to those battles, and then give you some feedback on your strong and weak points. In the future, I would really enjoy recruiting one or two of our more ambitious members to become fellow writers of these threads also so that everyone can get multiple opinions, as that's the optimum way to elevate.

What this series intends to do is allow you to objectively view the way you write and / or rap and polish out anything that might be holding you back as an emcee.

So get ready, because I'm going to get to writing the first episode of this series as soon as I'm finished posting this, duces!