shit are you talking about your father or your mother or thy brother or about your self i throw very punchline against me straight back at you you suck to many dicks now you think your a queen you fucking maggot i put you six feet deep and let the maggots eat your flesh . i don,t give a dame about you or anyone that works with you have no history except has a mother fucking low life eating out of a garbage can and stealing girl cloths for your own fucking pleasure you little creep you just a little boy with out a brain play with your rattle you little rat and chase the cattle if you can catch up that is go watch cat in the hat like a good he/she would be doing now go play with your self enough of your bullshit which you just step in and drag all the bull shit in your house now mama grabs a paddled with pink rose on it and smacks you to halve to death and then your dad comes home splat.

You need to CAP your rhyming words, You need less filler... (which is words in the verse that are not needed and just put there for transitional purposes...Less filler the better) You have simple basic Punchlines that are all over used, you need to be more complex and creative with what you come up with, If you're going to talk about yourself in a battle, make sure you equally if not more diss the other person and throw as many punches as possible. You also want a strong ender, Likely the best punch in the verse to close it with. Try not to say " You" a lot too. Say "this dude" or their name or Bitch or anything...mix it up.

thank you .

link me to any of your battles bro.il give you a detailed expo.