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Pseudo Nim vs Starwalker
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PeaceandLaug... vs Bnas
Style: Freestyle
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KDOTCARTER vs PeaceandLaug...
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FightsAndRap... vs PeaceandLaug...
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KDOTCARTER vs Mizz Ammo
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SF Ghost vs KDOTCARTER
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MRS RAPPER B vs SF Ghost
Style: Freestyle
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Occam vs FightsAndRap...
Style: Freestyle
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PeaceandLaug... vs Bnas
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1mp4l3d vs mister jon f...
Style: Freestyle
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PeaceandLaug... vs Bnas
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KDOTCARTER vs PeaceandLaug...
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02-22-2013 09:36 PM

Hubert Cumberdale

Tribble
"We're fairly odd" think with your SLANG TIMMY, grab a rope and see if you can "HANG-WIT-ME"

I feel like im missing something here? I dont see how the: "We're fairly odd" line has anything to do with the punchline? I think the concept of the actual punch had some potential but the execution was a bit lazy here. Make sure the wording is straight. The bar was very unnaturally worded. "We're fairly odd" think with your SLANG TIMMY. Thats not a sentence you'd ever say in real life. Keep an eye on the wording!

02-22-2013 09:37 PM

Hubert Cumberdale

Nephes
i'm slowely moving Forward, but every-TIME i here EMINEM/ it makes me go nuts like i wanna chew M&M'S/ it just seems like my clock is ticking Backwards/

This bar is a bit of a mess to me. Eminems / M&M's is a very played multi set. And having a punchline end on a non-rhyme is a big no-no. I saw no insult to your opponent here either. Need to start from stratch my dude.

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