Your new challenge is to do exactly what you did last week, with no rap/battle/gunplay word as 'guidance'. You must think up your own 'word' to flip/wordplay with, and make the punch yourself. Same rules as last week apply, you must repeat your end of line multi at least once.

Look over the feedback and advice you received in the Lesson thread and improve this time around.

Example:

My word: Lines

He's COMING AND BEATING ME? Nah I'll put the lines on your sceen like a disRUPTION OF FREQUENCY

Man...my examples are shit lmao . But you know what I mean.

Good luck everyone. As usual, if you have any questions, just ask.

i'm slowely moving Forward, but every-TIME i here EMINEM/ it makes me go nuts like i wanna chew M&M'S/ it just seems like my clock is ticking Backwards/

I have a COLD TOUCH// My style hits you harder than a BULL RUSH// Flow quicker than potheads on a BOWL RUSH//

Don't be "alarmed" i'm a TIME CLOCK AT WORK / u cudn "steal time" if i had LIFELOCK ALERT

these minutes your charging up rhyming ARE RISING you couldn't "drop a line" if you owned "VERIZON"

"We're fairly odd" think with your SLANG TIMMY, grab a rope and see if you can "HANG-WIT-ME"

After being judged by 3 ACs Members and Grand Champion and Hall of Famer RULE, the score for this week's challenge is as follows.

1. hectick - 13 Points (1 Removed for using "Lines" which was the same as the example)
2. Tyger Woodz - 11 Points
3. Tribble - 9 Points
4. Brutal J - 6 Points
5. Nephes = 0 Points

Overall Standings
1. Brutal J / hectick - 29 Points
3. Tyger Woodz - 27 Points
4. Tribble - 24 Points
5. Nephes - 10 Points

The next Lesson and Challenge will be posted up later today or tommorow.

Feedback from RULE

Tyger Woodz
Don't be "alarmed" i'm a TIME CLOCK AT WORK / u cudn "steal time" if i had LIFELOCK ALERT

I like that this bar had a lot of references and a strong theme through it. However you have to watch the wording and the actually insult impact here. "You couldnt steal time?" What does that even mean? Its not really an insult unless you word it in a way that makes it relevant. Like you could of had a reference in the build about wounding him, and in that case he'd need to steal time to survive you know? The multis were straight and the bar had a good attempt at creativity throughout. Just make sure the wording is straight. Read your bars back to yourself in normal sentence form to make sure they make complete sence.

hectick
these minutes your charging up rhyming ARE RISING you couldn't "drop a line" if you owned "VERIZON"

The concept is quite a played one, lines/telephone theme has been done a lot. However i did like the simplistic nature, you clearly know HOW to write a punchline. Its time to upgrade to more creative subject matter. Also make the most of the build: these minutes your charging up rhyming ARE RISING... although its all on theme it doesnt really make sense does it? Read your lines back to yourself when you write a bar and make sure your not adding references just for the sake of having them. The bar still needs to make sense.

Brutal J
I have a COLD TOUCH// My style hits you harder than a BULL RUSH// Flow quicker than potheads on a BOWL RUSH//

The multis were crisp here. The problem i have is that none of it was an insult. Its all bigging yourself up, which is not the object of a battle. theres no theme here or fresh concept. Work on focusing your bars at your opponent and stay away from themes and references that are done often.