sorry about some of the repetitive internal rhyme scheme....pretty crazy flow though... ummm twist at the end... weer you expecting it??? FEEDBACK of any kind welcome :D... hope you enjoyed
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2007-06-15 23:38:17

i'll RIP HIM IN THREE SLIPS while STICKIN IN THREE CLIPS bundles! LISTEN TO ME BITCH when i state the facts you'll never be SICKER THEN ME PRICK!!! ahha hot shit...9
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2007-06-16 00:31:30

INTENSE. 10.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2007-06-16 02:40:39

NICE CYPHER BUNDLEZ!!!
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2007-06-16 07:01:39

whoa dis nice bundles a lil short but still a 9
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2007-06-16 11:44:41

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Rated: 9

Posted on: 2007-06-16 12:27:09

I would like to focus on the last line, how poetic. The only thing worse than having a mother thats not there, is knowing she's not there because she died for you to live. Of course, that's my opinion. Very nice. R.I.P Bundlez
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2007-06-17 06:10:34

WOW.......thats some intense iht right there!! so wait, did u litteraly kill her, or was it just figurativly, like she died and you feel that it was ur fault.....or did u kill her emotionaly????
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2007-06-21 12:19:34

^^^ in my opinion..the last line makes the cypher... coz it leaves it open to however you want to see it... im just gonna leave it at that
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2007-06-22 08:43:50

I dunno if I like it but the hiphop aspects were good, lol. I hope u still seeing that councillor Bundz, rofl ~10~
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2007-07-03 12:31:56