simply amazing bro you grasp the use of words at an exceptionally high level very impressive
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2019-04-12 22:24:12

Wow. I see you Wolf, you got some shit on yo chest. This has an unreal feeling to it, not because it's not believable but cause it's that real shit. You put heart into this & for that, you deserve the recognition & respect. You may not have the most advanced style or structure but the content you spit is what makes up for that. I fucks w this on a heavy note, bring more of this light to the site playa. "So while their souls are in paradise, yours is forever doomed to the streets So now when you see your kids faces lying in a casket as your whole world crumbles Touch their cold skin, your own kin, and you feel your heart stumble You almost hear them speak, were they strong? were they weak? We’re they wronged? Were they meek? Were they the wolves amongst the sheep?"
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2019-04-15 02:48:42

ya great stuff, alot of effort put into this, i dig how poetic it is, good job...nice cypher
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2019-04-27 18:55:53

Could buy himself some “bling” but couldn’t bring home his own family some bread. Outside every night with niggas you don’t even know, just trying to get some street cred . Chasing an Imaginary dream of glory based on all the fake shit that you’ve read talking about gangstas, living in the heat And your thinking bout lambos when your kids are thinking about when they’re gonna eat. Building up your own world of fantasy, a holy deceit Not thinking about how these kids are, where they’ll be, just receiving pleasure, deposit seed So while their souls are in paradise, yours is forever doomed to the streets Fucking real talk all the way, i resonate with this shit. Touch their cold skin, your own kin, and you feel your heart stumble You almost hear them speak, were they strong? were they weak? We’re they wronged? Were they meek? Were they the wolves amongst the sheep? Shit went all sorts of dark here on damn. All you thought was one more hit One more time Just one more sip one last line two more trips four more crimes 8 more chips 10 less dimes Now it’s over, no more crips but it’s too late there’s no more time kids wrists is slit there’s no more strife Sp lucky you, you get to live out ya gangsta fantasies for life Loved the dark sarcasm here. Man this was depressing and fuck you for that i had a better mood before reading this and that just goes on to show realistically dark this fucking cypher is wtf!!! There were a few filler lines here and there and brillint solo lines amongst them here and there too like this one - These niggas risking houses and their bank for the jack pot. I think if you could consolidate the verse and etch out the fillers and keep only the best lines which is the most of the verse anyway, this could be turned into a song of the tupac levels honestly. The poetic story telling factors is outta this world here, very clear imagery man!!
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2019-05-15 02:03:05