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"Grandma! "

Vegeta
VATO NIGGA ENTERTAINMENT

Vegeta

I am not a topical/storytelling wrapper. 
 But just a written piece for my granny I lost last month. Kinda loosely related to her .
 Lemme know what yall think on this

Married to army man, 
she was on her own for a major part of her life
Only time she felt his presence was after retirement
But he was gone, now she was alone in hostile environment
Her story is inspiring 
coz not every time you see someone go smiling after spending darkest of nights
Homeless for life its now we decided on a house that we buying
But lemme tell you why, well these may not be hottest of rhymes
But this ones for Grandma, one of her battles outta many fights 
where she triumphed, 
won n fought like a lioness
Betrayed by own relatives, she was mocked every time
Those monsters n swines said you got a little daughter n child, 
Argument choice isn't good, get these documents signed 
She tore them in style and flashed that confident smile
Shocked every eye in the room to leave that offer denied!
They came back to hit her stronger this time, flaunted the files, outcomes of forgery crime
She tried to stop them, shouted - the property's mine
Couldn't do shit she felt hollow inside, while she watched her empire fall like a domino tile!!
Back to below poverty line she thought for a while
that heart of a lion said these things are part n parcel of life
Got up with pride, 
with a dream to put things back faster this time
that brought her in prime, she came back stronger n shined!
The last laugh didn't last much longer
despite facing every difficulty n torture in life
Last month was when she had a fall n she died
But while going she ensured to inspire many lives !!

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Cypher started: April 26^th 2018 at 15:21

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<Beef Gang>

Condolences for your loss, this was a nice tribute and well thought out
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2018-04-29 16:11:01

Member Comments

HVK <Classick At Rhymin>	NICE LYRICS, I RECENTLY LOST MY GRANDAD SO I CAN ACTUALLY CAN RELATE TO ALOT OF THIS...... GOOD EMOTIONAL STUFF BRO, THIS WOULD SOUND GOOD TO AN EMOTIONAL BEAT. Rated: 10 Posted on: 2018-04-26 15:27:06
Vegeta <VATO NIGGA ENTERTAINMENT>	Thanks a lot fam!! @HVK Feels great getting such feedback from you :) Rated: 10 Posted on: 2018-04-26 15:28:43
PKbandz	sorry man can feel some of ur pain hang in there brody Rated: 10 Posted on: 2018-04-26 15:32:08
Shodan <Black Mesa>	This is definitely personal af, great shit Rated: 10 Posted on: 2018-04-26 16:39:02
KG The Prince	lyrics were nicely, a personal touch in there too, her legacy will live on in you brotha Rated: 10 Posted on: 2018-04-26 16:49:47
Nerdism	Dope read bro, definitely a personal one Rated: 10 Posted on: 2018-04-26 17:55:05
TonganKidd	Strong words brotha Rated: 10 Posted on: 2018-04-26 18:34:48
LandMind	Really felt your words nice job man. Having lost someone close to me recently as well I can understand how therapeutic it can be to just write whats going on inside. Great job brotha! Rated: 10 Posted on: 2018-04-27 00:45:59
ItzzOver <Red Ribbon Army>	This was Hard. Really personal af Rated: 10 Posted on: 2018-04-27 00:53:28
BLACKNUCKLEZ323 <Wild Wild West>	the deadman sent me this... https://www.letsbeef.com/cypher_details.php?section=tb&id=67957 would appreciate if u have a read and rate this fam Posted on: 2018-04-27 02:44:08
BKC\|Kalamite <FRESH SMOKE💯>	decent stuff, add some elongated metaphors and you got a song right here. keep it up man😎 Rated: 7 Posted on: 2018-04-27 02:50:55
Nicky Warz	i feel the pain in this one as well as good storytelling Rated: 10 Posted on: 2018-04-28 02:37:06
Polo5 <Infinite Dialect>	Shit made me cry it was dope Rated: 10 Posted on: 2018-04-29 14:58:31
lil gameringboy	nice rap Rated: 7 Posted on: 2018-04-30 06:15:22
SinCredible	Condolences. Well written Rated: 10 Posted on: 2018-04-30 08:49:36
DOG PACK	Can some one give me a reason to give this a 9 or a 7 ? Rated: 10 Posted on: 2018-05-01 16:51:48
Rational Madman	While heartfelt I don't see much of a complex rhyme scheme or metaphorical wordplay here. Sorry but this is more than average to me but not amazing. For example what was this whole family betraying her thing about? Why not go into more detail? I am confused I think that she had an illegitimate child (out of wedlock)? I am not the type to automatically give 10/10 just because a poem is heartfelt sorry. Rated: 6 Posted on: 2018-05-06 09:04:15
customadepoetry <Fierce Kingz Of Rap>	It's really good when a rapper can but a true story into bars, which is refreshingly different from the bars dictating the direction of the story. This was very heartfelt and went in the right direction Rated: 10 Posted on: 2018-09-24 11:00:59
Nickle	Loosing close ones is shit, and you perfectly explained how it feels bro. Props to you for making it. Rated: 10 Posted on: 2019-01-18 09:03:52