Decent attempt..only advice is to work on your rhyming patterns and schemework. Use longer schemes, maybe add a rhyming multi set in between to add a bit to the flow. Keep at it
Rated: 6

Posted on: 2017-08-21 21:32:12

Yeah ✌ cosign with Oscar. U need to lengthen you schemes add a few multi syllables and perhaps try to think of an idea to connect your rhymes so it can be solid and straightforward at the same time bug bro. Swing some votes back lol. Also vote in my old cipher. One.
Rated: 7

Posted on: 2017-08-21 21:36:24

You got a good foundation but your schemework needs a little tweaking. Maybe throw some multies in there like OSKAR said. All in all i like the tone keep it up homie
Rated: 7

Posted on: 2017-08-21 21:37:05

Lyrically this was fairly lackluster, but you painted a good image and talked about some real shit. I liked it.
Rated: 7

Posted on: 2017-08-21 21:39:48

Dope shit. Deep bro, need to hear this on track or very least audio cypher.. keep it up 💯
Rated: 8

Posted on: 2017-08-21 21:50:20

Not bad
Rated: 6

Posted on: 2017-08-21 22:55:58

niiice...
Rated: 6

Posted on: 2017-08-22 13:53:35

This was a dope cypher. Salute AR
Rated: 8

Posted on: 2017-08-22 20:09:03

Nice flow
Rated: 7

Posted on: 2017-08-23 01:03:25

really dope would like to hear it recorded
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2017-08-24 15:32:49

Definitely improved on your structure..Liked the overall flow/concept as well
Rated: 7

Posted on: 2017-09-16 17:51:42